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A Systematic Tale: The Hero 6

🕑 Added 2025-04-07 23:46:10 +0000 UTC

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CJ

The annoying bots must have flagged it or something. Give me a min to check it out

VeiledCryptid

Chapter five doesn't exist for me and I'm very confused

Ricardo Torres II

Also fix Emma Barnes

Ototsu_Yume

Fun~ Going to be interesting if this results in Alexandria joining mc somewhere and getting a precog power herself that isn't clearly being directed by another entity for it's own ends like Contessa's probably is, should also allow her to realise that following Doctor Mother who's neither a doctor nor a mother is a bad idea, especially considering she's an amoral sociopath.

WhatAFungi

You spilled some Izuku in my Arms Master. And you spilled some Rumiko in my Shadow Stalker. And I think these changes are great. I think you’re going to keep catching flak for not being exactly like cannon and not following a lot of the worm clichés. However I’m really enjoying the fresh view on this fandom and hope you keep it up. Silas is working with what he’s got, and people need to remember that so far his memory of the plot seems blurry at best, so even if he was depending on obviously false knowledge joining the PRT’s faction seems the safest space for now. He gets protection from getting offed by the gangs, Coil shouldn’t really care all that much about him because he lacks any thinker powers that synergies with his power, and Cauldron won’t off him because they think he’s under their thumb. OMG! I LOVE the explanation for the earth being the only planet in their multiverse cluster! What a nice touch. I say give Stalker a chance. As long as the bullying wasn’t as bad as in canon. Lean into the battle junkie version of her you got here. Less psycho-wanna-be-Predator. Thanks for the chapter!

WhatAFungi

You’re crazy if you think any of the alternatives are more viable at this point. t this point he’s effectively barely a brute/mover 2ish with like a blaster 4 at best. The options are stay solo and get abducted because of how public the “trigger” event was. Join a villain group. Leave town. Or maybe join new wave, which has arguable less resources than the PRT. I’m open to suggestions, but this seemed the smartest choice

D3AD3CHO

Yeah love your Fics but anyone joining the prt is just dumb unless they don't know how corrupt it is like Set from Gambler by D.W.S. and considering your mc knows what the put is about and still joins it makes it just dumb

StarSmith

Yeah any story we’re the mc willing joins the crapshoot that is the wards/ protectorate is missing brain cells. Great writing I just can’t get behind willingly working for them and giving them so much info


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