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Fixed* The Fox Hole 83

🕑 Added 2025-04-14 05:50:55 +0000 UTC

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Diabet0s

Kinda agree with the above points. Story started great but the content and story direction drop hard. Also mc seems less and less sympathic... Also feels more like a side character than an mc... And his pushover tendencies grow sadly at the same time his brain gets more and more damage.

LuciferDFallN1

Mid writing in this chapter, it seems like you used up all your creativity on the other stories and made this so-so chapter after

LuciferDFallN1

Ultimate Class only means one thing - the person have enough power to level a city. Being smart isn't a condition required for the rank

LuciferDFallN1

It's anti-matter bomb... Technically if it can really generate anti-matter nothing short of a miracle could have stop it, but I agree he acted real stupid and didn't use any of his supernatural abilities, and for what? To give us a half ass backstory about how he was the consort of some god-queen in the past, who one day decided she didn't like him so she cast him away? Mid backstory

HugoH

I am not sure about this chapter : 1) a nuclear bomb shouldn’t have done so much damage to Haru (are you nerfing him ?) 2) You made him act dumber than he should. Really, he hasn’t found anything better than cover the bomb with his body ? 3) While Red Queen having a back up physical structure is logic. I don’t like how you are painting her as a futur enemy. It looks like you will write something like that : Red Queen as an Alice look alike will find and enter the restaurant without bringing suspicion on herself. She will learn about Tensura world, somehow get named or at least naturally evolve until she become a credible threat like an evil version of Ciel.

Ototsu_Yume

DxD and Tensura beings by default have magic running through their body creating an automatic barrier making them immune to all mundane stuff too, the most the nuke would have done is make him sneeze, author tends to drop the ball when it comes to power scaling sadly.

Ototsu_Yume

Haru once again proving that his ultimate class ranking is a lie it seems. Dude's gone and left a bunch of DNA around now too so future clones and undead fox hybrids are most likely going to show up in the future too due to how careless the guy is, kinda surprised Red Queen didn't wait to respawn until she made herself some kind of genetic daughter of Alice and Haru first though.

MartinHappenedToBeHere

There is no way that a nuke should do this much damage to haru even if he would be just ultimate class like at the start of the novel it wouldn't have done this much damage and since then he had multiple power ups. I really don't like it when authors are this inconsisent with their power scaling.

LuluViBritania

even as an Ultimate Class at the start of the story before he was named he was already a city buster and could have created a barrier to easily contain the blast without taking damage, and after being named it should have been even easier

WhatAFungi

Called it! I gotta say. If Haru can beat up Behemoth for his lunch money, he can no sell a nuke. Just sayin. Great chapter other than that. I’m happy to get some more info drop fed to us about Haru’s past and hopefully some more information about the goddess Thanks for the chapter!

The Milf Emperor

I think your too harsh for the first part but agree on the bottom about skills, food buffs and alchemy

The Milf Emperor

He is not a demon lord, he has a seed.

zak moe

This novel is disappointing. Even though the MC is strong, he doesn’t want to learn any new powers from other worlds, even though he has access to them. All he relies on is his fox form and fire, which is boring as hell. On top of that, all he does is collect girl after girl. I don’t know the exact number anymore, but his harem is already around 7 to 9 girls—and it’s only chapter 83. This can't go on. Even though he seems to enjoy cooking, he doesn’t fully utilize it. He could be using cooking like alchemy, creating food that gives buffs, but he doesn’t.

Dave

Also mc’s Godfrey?

Dave

Bro you’ve got to make that nuke a continent or planet buster like in Halo if you want it doing anything to Haru. Theres no way a city scale weapon would do anything but singe his fur

xerxes33311

Wow, first in all your ff that I felt so disappointed. Considering the powerscale of dxd and mc being a limit breaking an already hegemonic yokai. A nuclear blast definitely wouldn't do that much damage to him not only in his mortal form but most certainly not in his unleashed state 😮‍💨

Asriels

I'm sorry to say this but nukes are literally a joke in DXD as it's basically the power of a solid high class devil

Trey-Way

Doesn’t he have that universal barrier demon lords from tensura get??


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