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That's not Wizard Magic! Ch 9

🕑 Added 2025-08-20 07:02:56 +0000 UTC

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Aleksey A E

To understand, if this is the beginning of a new year and Sona already had the Summer Saji, then the DxD timeline has already passed Volume 6 and the Khaos Brigade attack. Honestly, I'm not sure Sona should even be alive or feel okay considering she screwed up her interaction with Saji and basically lost her main trump card in the game against Rias (hell, why not use that fact as a point of Rias's concern for Sona? Honestly, the Rias and Sona interlude was the worst part of this chapter because it violates any possible logical situations too much. It seemed like you weren't even interested in writing about DxD and that's why I'm disappointed that instead of a crossover with DxD I see an incomprehensible parody that has nothing to do with DxD, but for some reason tries to pretend that DxD is here. Sorry, but putting names of famous characters on your original characters and pretending that this is a different fandom and not an imitation similar only in the names of characters who are not them in essence, is not a crossover.

Aleksey A E

Okay, does the author at least realize how much he mindlessly latches on to labels and violates the DxD war line? Saji didn't join Sona until Issei joined Rias. Then Kokabiel attacked. By this point, Rias is already in love with Issei and Saji should probably have been in love with Sona. Like, seriously. Why is it written as if the characters have become mouthpieces for the author's opinion and not anything else? (Sona and Rias don't care about perverts, they would have already paid attention to Issei by now). Like, seriously, the main problem with DxD and Harry Potter crossovers is the exaggeration of Harry's importance. And I understand that the events that happen on the DxD side are not important in the context of Harry's point of view. But ignoring them when it comes to DxD characters is extremely unreasonable. Like, seriously, why would you write a fanfic about a fandom you didn't even try to study a little bit? Up until this chapter, things were still pretty normal, since the devil side was mostly represented by Serafall and some of the Sitri members. And their interactions with Harry. They probably wouldn't want to worry Narri about Sona almost getting killed by Kokabiel or some of the events happening in the supernatural world. But why the hell are Rias and Akeno condemning the perverted behavior of some students when they themselves love the pervert for that very reason? Like, seriously, was it really that hard to just write the characters as they are in canon and not lobotomize them?

Christian E. Y.

I still wanna see a wildly different attitude from Snape towards the son of Lily.


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