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EAC Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2017-10-28 03:46:25 +0000 UTC

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HardhatDoozer

Definitely the twist I've been hoping for. If Maria can sell it to Amber as well, we could have an excellent double agent. It definitely leaves me excited to see the next chapter.

larqven

Some spoilers. _________________________________________________________________ Very interesting! The 'bookworm turned' all in one chapter! To be sure, Maria suddenly 'rehabilitated' herself previously by proving that she could be brave. But now she had to go a whole lot further. In this chapter Maria suddenly unleashed her own dark side such as it is. But it was enough to take control of the situation. It does make me wonder anew how much of an effect Amber's power has on its subjects that has really very little to do with what she says. Even so, it would seem that Maria is choosing to play at being a dominant lesbian of her own volition--at least as much as the bizarre situation makes such an effort possible. While there was a great moment of submissiveness to Heather early on, Maria clearly--rose to the top. I really like small, flat, or uncertain women ensnared by the super-woman, but the idea of tall and strong amazons or fiery girls kneeling to the petite woman or even nerd has its own appeal. Maria might have already been previously gay? Unknown, she never did anyone before. Certainly she made the 'transition' rather neatly and even triumphantly! Although, you've largely avoided conflict in 'girls going gay' in mind control conversion. Even with all these positives--one might wonder if Maria is falling into a 'trap of her own device'? If nothing else, she's getting bogged down and 'stuck' in the conversion room, when she might have escaped. But escape might not have helped her much, it is true. Maria might be on the verge of setting herself up as an 'alternate mistress'? But one word, or even a look, from Amber could change all that? We shall see. Otherwise, Rebecca is still out there, the two 'hero' girls are the last ones standing after all.

Stephen Williams

I'd say you're back in form. This is the best EAC yet.

Chris Wiley

Or if anyone makes it.

ParagonRocky

Happy to see this one come back! It's so tense waiting to see who's going to make it.


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