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Caroline's New Friends

🕑 Added 2021-12-06 19:53:40 +0000 UTC

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John

Hey Sammy, I just read this one. I, for one, liked it. While yes I agree with Cosmonautno.6 in that I would have liked to see Caroline resist at least some. As if she realized something wasn't right, but couldn't stop it from happening, maybe? Otherwise, I liked it. It was a good, simple fun story to read...

CosmonautNo.6

What separates your writing from the rest of what's out there is how well you create conflict and personalities in addition to the smut.  This story is lacking both, in my opinion.  I am sure you wanted to give the fans something after a short hiatus, and I look forward to your best stuff, when it comes out.


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