Ryan Rimmel
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Noobtown 8 - Too much
🕑 Added 2023-05-15 16:25:14 +0000 UTCSo utlimatly Noobtown is the story of Jim, and I think one of the problems is that I like ensemble novels a bit too much. My initial ending focused too much other other characters and that was costing me a bit in the personalization of Jim's story.
So while my revised story still has other characters in it, I'm tightening this down to fewer characters so that it is easier to follow and the story feels more personal. I think that is what it needed to really have the punch at the ending I wanted.
Anyrate, still working on it. I've got my confidence back though and that's 90% of the job for me.
Comments
Larry Schultz
I love Jim character development! Give me more about his past.
David Barnes
Aces!
