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7DoS A Prequel Comic - Page 86 & 87
🕑 Added 2023-07-18 05:51:39 +0000 UTC***UPDATE***
I really did not like the looks of page 86 after the fact. It was just too cluttered with text, and the original shot just did center up properly for a full-page panel. So I split it up (again) into 2 pages. Having the extra panels also livens up Michelle's dialogue in a way that I'm much happier with. I also salvaged the original render for the first panel with Britt talking.
Here is the original just for posterity...
I think my original intent when framing the shot was to have more text to the right of Michelle, but there was no room, and without anything over there it just looks weird.
MEGA folders have all been updated with the 2 new pages.
***ORIGINAL POST***
Late again... I apologize. Had a bout of food poisoning or something, then my father tripped and broke his leg, so once I was no longer sick I was busy helping my parents out.
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I had to rewrite this page a few times.
I really hate when I can not read a comic from my phone without needing to zoom in. So I've tried to be very consistent, with a few exceptions, in keeping all my font at the same pixel size settings throughout the comic.
The issue is, that leaves much less space for dialogue on each page.
Sometimes lines get cut, other times I just rewrite lines to make them shorter.
If I shorten the lines too much, they lose the personality of the character speaking. So I often just add another page to spread the dialogue out more.
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Tiered MEGA Link Posts can be found here:
