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August Intruder- Chapter 150- No Dissonance

🕑 Added 2025-06-19 08:21:39 +0000 UTC

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John Anastacio

I saw the changes re mommy, thanks Observer.

nicholas machado

Edit suggestion: “With a sigh of relief, the car drove the car forward, cutting into a parking space, and brought the car to a stop” -> the first mention of car is likely supposed to be the taxi drivers name

Mr. Iron

Had to make this comment half way through, Marc is adorable.

nobody

Also chapter number should be 150 instead of 50

nobody

Tha k you for the chapter

nobody

It's fine at core he is just a mommy's boy not everything needs to be ...🙂

John Anastacio

almost naked - I'm alarmed. Just how much skin are they showing? mommy - I earnestly advise to change this to mom or mother . Other than that great chapter, thank you.

Julkur

Can they hide it from their mother? It should at least get to the news

Sparifankerl

Thanks for the chapter. A few minor points for editing: “They Gifted!” -> "They are Gifted!" "Felix gave him a befuddled look, then pointed at himself." -> I believe this should be Josh. There was a third but I can't find it again. Maybe you already fixed it. Or I'm going blind.


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