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Elayne Beaumont Comic: Pages 28-36
🕑 Added 2019-10-14 05:33:36 +0000 UTCNSFW Warning
The pages contained in this post contain nudity and sexual subject matter.
Previous Pages
I expect I will update previous pages, but I will compile all of the finished pages together to make for easier reading. For now, you can find the previous pages through the Dropbox Archive or the links shared above.
About - Initial
Oof. We're reaching the end here. I wanted all of these pages to be available for reading at once so you didn't have to wait to see the subsequent story beats for the first 5 pages. This is the end of this particular scene and the final scene will just be a couple pages long, so you can expect those next few pages by the end of the week.
There's a lot happening in these few pages, so it took quite a bit of time to get them done.
About - Update
And we're at the end of the comic. There are a few more illustrations left to finish the "story" but we're pretty much done with the metaphorical meat and potatoes. It's a bit unfortunate that the Vampire Queen doesn't get as many paqes to be characterized, so I had to wrestle with the dialogue quite a bit so it didn't feel as forced as it did originally.
You can now read the ENTIRE script in the Dropbox Archive. The text is what the story was ORIGINALLY intended to be written as, so you might notice a few differences here and there as far as word choices go and panel structure, so that might be fun to compare.
Don't forget to eat & sleep.
Comments
Bob Dasyati
How to hug someone whose village you just saved 1. Wrap your arms around them. 2. Hold on tight 3. DO NOT get an erection 4. Don't do it
ZBL
This is great. I'd just suggest a reaction from the maiden whom's thanking Elayne, to understand how she feels about her rejection.
