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Legacy Post: Chapter 1 Snippets
🕑 Added 2025-09-09 16:00:09 +0000 UTCPour over some juicy screenshots of Chapter 1 that our editor provided notes for us! Learn more about why editors are so important, and get a little sneak peek at something steamy ahead π³
Every script in TOUCHSTARVED goes through three drafting rounds, with writers exchanging notes to refine the story and tone. After that, directors comb through each line in detail before handing it off to our editor, who not only catches grammar and spelling errors, but also gives insightful feedback on clarity and content. Thank you for our life, Jay!!
Roses, amber, burnt sugar, and sweat. How do you all feel about that combination of aromas? Do you think it's a lot? I did, that's why I removed it, and even this version you're reading has gone through several drafts since. It goes to show that revising never ends as a writer, even after the editor does his pass. π
Also, being in a brothel in Chapter 1?? We're moving fast! ππ¨aaahhh!!
-Lulu
Comments
CINNAMON
UGH I need this game soo bad!!!
Staryπ«
AHHHHHH this is incredible and it's so fun seeing how the edits change the flow of the story! π«ΆπΎπ€ Also Aisssss, I need him on a body pillow or something π«£
Ahkrin
It will be so painful to wait next year to be able to have Ais' hand around my waist but I'll wait. Starved, thirsty, but I'll wait.
