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Epilogue 1.1: Preface

🕑 Added 2024-10-18 06:55:00 +0000 UTC

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Gabriel Melnik

Yeah, but such murderers went unpunished. Given all the motifs about law, judgement and retribution, in my opinion, it would have closed the novels concepts quite nicely. Here the heralds got deported and that's it. Imagine someone like Hitler falling into the allies hands, only for him to be deported out of Germany, that's what I feel when I see these fucks just getting ignored. What makes it worse is the fact that they implied that this isn't the only world where they can leech off.

Apotheosis

I liked the ending, and in its defense I'll say that the heralds being largely ignored and pushed out is what they deserved. Their oh so important machinations were always to the worlds downside and they only cared for things beyond it, so its only fitting that the world (and argrave) ignored them and shut them out forevermore

Obsessivehobbyist

I think I agree with Gabriel here, at least in part. I agree with him that the end to the threat posed by the Heralds feels a little 'unfinished' or a little lacklustre. I also feel that given the gravity with which Hause referred to Argrave's latent potential as 'judgement' it didn't feature much in the final battle except for his confrontation with the Hopeful. I feel that the novel's conclusion should incorporate Argrave's creation and authority of the Sun's, his potential for 'judgement', as well as the revelation of his connection to Griffin. All these disparate threads feel unfinished or left hanging? I think incorporating them into some sort of payoff to deal with the Heralds would go a long way to improving the story's ending. P.S. I'm really enjoying the epilogue chapters. Really reminds me of 'Worth the Candle' by Alexander Wales.

Gabriel Melnik

I feel like a better ending to the story would have been if instead of the aggressive double suicide, argrave had brought to trial everyone involved and worked like a judge and the sun's of souls as a jury. People who were deemed worthy by the sun's could have been part of the legal proceedings, with people like Law working as a prosecutor and the cravens like the Heralds, Jaray, Griffin and the Hopeful as defendants, mirroring historical events like the Nuremberg trials after world war 2. In my opinion it could have fit, given that judgement shouldn't be basically a power of absolute destruction and only that, given that the judicial proceedings done before on Law's Court were quite good, and it ties the whole potential for judgement quite nicely.

Gabriel Melnik

They will never be the British royal family by virtue of their martial power. The royals keep in power thanks in part to the excuse that they are toothless, and about the power couple it won't be that way. The biggest chink on their character that people on the future could point out would be that they did so much that it seems like a lie.

JarVekx

This is so satisfying

WarStrider72

Love this style of epilogue.

An_Reader89

Additionally, I’m really excited to read how the population reacts to the cultural shift that is going to occur (assuming Argrave and company pull a modern british royal family)

An_Reader89

It seems Argrave “wiki editor” tendencies run in the family with Garm being a coauthor in this book lol


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