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Jackals & Batteries 25-26 | Web Res
🕑 Added 2023-04-22 17:41:38 +0000 UTCTsen told Unadi to get fucked, now Unadi' told her to go fuck herself...Turnabout is fair play I guess!
Seile is just focusing on his job like the good boy he is ;).
I'm trying something a bit different going forward, in that each little arc will be about 4-5 pages, then I'm gonna do a hard-smash into the next scene...so the next scene after this is actually gonna be a courtoom scene where we get to see what happens to Tsenaya because of what she's done.
What do you think? Do you like this abbreviated format for scenes, or would you rather they went on for longer?
In any case, please enjoy the plaps!
Comments
Tygon Panthera
Well, I wouldn't mind a lot of dialogue... but I understand wanting to get on with the store. I will... learn to tolerate it ;)
Scappo
Yeah I understand- I'll be doing lots of "smash cuts" in terms of storytelling for a bit, but it's either this or 20-30 pages of nothing but dialog. I'm afraid you'll have to get used to the "rushed" storytelling style because shorter arcs mean less foreplay. Hulk Smash >83
Tygon Panthera
Looking at these pages all done and in color, it feels a bit... rushed. Things go from trading swearwords to fucking/masturbating a bit... sudden. Not "dealbreaker" sudden, but it is a bit noticeable. I think an additional page with Unadi and Seile getting started and Tsen starting to finger herself after the initial surprise might have been a good idea. But I understand wanting to get to the good bits. I bring this up because the plan to make the scenes shorter. It can totally work when planned out properly, but I'm a bit afraid they will feel rushed too. Still, it would mean we'd get the actual story faster. And personally, I'm very curious to see what Tsen's punishment will be. So... probably worth a try. Regardless, great plaps :)
Oscar Cruz
Unadi is very sexy, wonder if she got plans for Tsen
Vawlkus
rats, we didn't see Tse pantsing herself :P
Synariel
Tsen should definitely follow Unadi's advice
Synariel
There are worse prisons...
Chrono Johnson
Hopefully Tsenaya gets to enjoy that cutie too
Jorge
I’m looking forward to it I really hope she gets to keep the snake
