Jackals & Batteries- Pages 12-14 WebRes
🕑 Added 2022-02-16 14:51:56 +0000 UTC*Spelling error on page 14 fixed!
Maeko's been keeping her cool all along, but quickly loses it when Kaera opens her big, bird mouth!
It was a real challenge to get the right amount of anger for Maeko, especially on page 13. Her face in the middle panel in particular needed a few redraws before I was happy with her level of unhappiness X3.
Meanwhile, I really want Kaera to be, if not a "deadpan" character, then at least one that doesn't usually show a lot of emotion...for all you Trekkies out there, I was thinking she might sound and act like a TNG/DS9 Romulan. Not quite as deadpan as Vulcans, but nearly as logical and ruthless in the way they think.
Thanks for your patience! It feels really good to get back to work on this comic ^_^.
Comments
Lunar Reaper117
So here's an idea that idk if you'd like, ever thought of an image of nailah and tsenaya getting it on?
Synariel
Birb is too cocky and needs to be stuffed
Luircin
Just that whole "disappointed in you" vibe is heartbreaking, even if it's accompanied by strip poker. Could have chosen to play in part in order to see if there was any kind of remorse for her actions? Or just trying to remember the good times because they're never coming again.
Darell
More plot ! Looking great! Cant wait to read the next pages :D
Shadow
Ever since the "Mongoose Mama milkers" art piece, I was expecting her to lactating when her breasts were pressed.
Shadow
Spot that too.
Andrew Ebear
Wohoo! This is lookin great ;D (Btw, page 14 typo: ‘you could have some to me’