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Amelia's wing shows up in panel 6 despite it not being visible from panel 3 (note the pillows). Marge panel 2 with panel 1 and keep the expression Amelia has from 2. Make panel 5 and 6 one panel framed like panel 4 to hold all dialogue, no scratch that just have the dialogue box coming from off screen.
