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Suggestion: Adine dialogue from panel 3, move that to panel 2. Remove panels 2 and 3 since we already know Adine hates the years she has 'wasted' so much of her life fluffing about doing things she does not want to. Might make it look too similar to panel 1, but take the expression from panel 3 on Adine and put it on panel 2.
M. B. Saunders
Thanks for pointing this out! We've fixed it now :)
Storm
Other than that. Poor Adine.
Storm
There's a typo on the second to last panel. I'm guessing a "he" is supposed to be "the".
