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Realist, 'Realism' and Cool.

🕑 Added 2025-11-09 07:45:54 +0000 UTC

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CapitaoCav

I mean, there's a place for stories like that... usually in the younger audience, and there's a reason it's supposed to happen to the MC, someone who usually has unnatural determination. However, I do think stories would be better if they don't rely on it, not that they can't be good, but I think every single story ever writen would be better if the author didn't make use of that trope and instead spent more time thinking about how the MC could solve/survive/win that fight/problem.

Mac-something

I enjoyed reading this. It does a good job of articulating the requirements to make a fight narratively interesting to watch. As for fights where the protagonist suddenly discovers the ‘will to win’ the older I get the more I want to say ‘the real world doesn’t work like that’ whenever I see it. I don’t because it’s a a shitty and petty thing to do but… the history of world would be VERY different if sheer enthusiasm was all it took to win.

Joseph

For me realism doesn't matter as much as internal consistency. You can add whatever rule and change you want as long as it is consistent and evenly applied for me. So if you add magic, fine but why can your MC do something awesome but everyone else can't? If you can't answer that well it always looks like poor writing to me. If your MC can get a powerup from his memory why not the bad guys? Why aren't they powering up and turning around to whoop the MC too?


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