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Halfway House EP9 is out!

🕑 Added 2022-02-13 21:42:55 +0000 UTC

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anon omous

bro wrote a nove in response to the comment 💀💀

Chris McKnight

I loved episode 9, but I hate the cliffhanger we were left on

DoobieDoobieDoo

You have focused on my parting shot like it was all I complained about.

Huw Gryffin

This has not been my experience of this or any other update and, it seems to me in any case, that a fast-moving, superficial storyline employing contrived sex scenes is far from what "Halfway House" is meant to be about. As I perceive it, this story is a study of characters with differing disadvantages coming together in a new and previously unknown (to them) environment and, as such therefore, especially in terms of relationship building, an inevitably wordy slow burner. The incidences of sex are intended to be naturally spontaneous occurrences (not contrived, as in many VNs) which, under the circumstances presented in the story and taking into account the characters' age, personalities and past experiences seem completely understandable and credible in their low number and infrequency. You're entitled to your opinion of course, and I may be completely wrong in my interpretations but it seems to me either misguided or unfair to criticize "Halfway House" for not being something which it seems (to me at least) it was never intended to be.

DoobieDoobieDoo

Felt weird to be failing point checks when the update didn't have any choices. Awful lot of lines to read for how far the ball moved down the field story wise. At least there's the sex. Oh wait, no...