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Never Die Twice 6: Summon the Minions

🕑 Added 2020-04-20 15:03:59 +0000 UTC

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Void Herald

Edited, thanks for the typo hunt!

Parker Groseclose

to call the entrance the ‘Maw -to calling the entrance the Maw The churches had erected holy spear pillars near the entrance, whose holy energies -This one's a little nitpicky, but think about taking out the first 'holy'. Would help the sentence flow better Tye noted that they didn’t have any high-level caster either yet, -take out 'either' or 'yet', using both is a bit redundant Thanks for the Chapter

Void Herald

The hexagram in occultism also represents the seal of Solomon, which was used to bind demons and jinns to the king's will. I believe it fits the idea of a more complex array meant to summon more powerful beings.

Joel Sasmad

Wouldn't making a pentagram a hexagram just make a star of david, a holy symbol that would disrupt demon summoning? The five points are there for a reason, each representing the 4 elements plus spirit so unless your adding an element or making it have 8 points for the chinese elements than it really doesn't make sense to change it.

Void Herald

A kind, friendly one as well!

Kevin Ramos

A yes, a respectable (al be it questionable) minion!


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