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The Perfect Run 129: The Gate and the Key

🕑 Added 2021-08-28 07:52:51 +0000 UTC

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Paradoxez Novel Reader

I refused to believe our Cinnamon bun wardrobe would have cheated on the architect even on any alternative world. She's too pure for this, what the hell did you tempt to her Ryan TT. Edit: oh wait, Architect is probably among the harem too so it's not cheating Seriously though , with cancel? Lmao just what trick did the jaded Ryan do to pull that off All in all , the worst time line is probably the one where Livia and Ryan's bond become undone

Treacherous_Usurper

That plushy's name? Kyubey.

Void Herald

You're welcome, and thanks for your support :)

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this experience with us, I'm honestly getting a little emotional remembering how long this story has gone on for and how satisfying it was to read. Thank you so much for your hard work, your writing means the world to me.

Adrian Engel

What a wild chapter. I am both happy and sad to see this story coming to a close. It's been a fun ride, thanks to the author and see you on the 31st.

Enzo Elacqua

I loved the ultimate one perspective. I feel like his interaction with Ryan is similar to how a human grows fond of an ant una and colony. Yet if it dies it’s still just and ant in the end, and there are trillions more out there that he could grow fond of. I feel you did the alien perspective well

mars kiyu

There were more than just neanderthals and sapiens it's just there's a lot less of the other lineages found and historically when they were found they were just ascribed to neanderthals but as our biological sciences advanced we found that they were too different for that to be true. On that sapiens were split before they fucked the other species too but it's not incorrect to say the tribes that fucked the various lineages also split. Humanity a history of fucking

mars kiyu

I don't know if you care to be accurate with what we know but if you do this line: "Two lineages of humans evolved and became one, before splitting into countless tribes. " should be : Lineages of humans evolved and became one, before splitting into countless tribes.

Alexander Dupree

Thanks for the chapters. Goodnight sweet prince

Void Herald

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you will love the last chapter as well ;)

Void Herald

You mean the side-stories that weren't chosen on the polls? A bit too many to count, and in Leaf & Seed's case, I'm really tempted to keep it for a potential spinoff. We'll see ;)

Void Herald

Not sure, I'll try to publish them quickly but in depth editing takes time unfortunately XD

Set

Could you tell us what you planned for the other side stories/interludes? Maybe in a seperate non-chapter post? It’s fine if not but I’m curious.

Soren

I only recently became a patron but it was Perfect Run that brought me here and I will certainly be staying around to read your future works. Thanks for writing this, it’s fulfilled the time loop niche + realistic superpowers world perfectly. I especially love the little bits of lovecraftian entities thrown in after the first half.

Deinos

It's not perfect yet. Where are the Chippendales? There's no perfect ending without Chippendales.

skewness7

first try? pogchamp

Void Herald

Corrected, thanks. Yeah, there has been some spacing issues though I don't understand why.

Bon Bon

When will perfect run be available for purchase? Will there be physical a copy? Thank u for great story!

MaliMi

The surprise Augustus instinctively raised his left arm to protect his head, and Ryan punched it with a fist of solid darkness. surprise -> surprised ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Black Flux erupted from her heart, his very soul, burning off the Saturn armor and shrouding his entire body in a cloak of darkness. her -> his ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Ryan glanced at this all-powerful Genome's face, and it looked so old, so scared beneath the bluster. This sentence is in two paragraphs. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Void Herald

I would say the Ultimate One is closer to Yog-Sothoth, and Ryan is the Zarathustra/ubermensch who achieved enlightenment ;)

sri kalyan mulukutla

I have to ask void, is the ultimate one zarathustra for ryan or is it livia?

Void Herald

Like a bickering family ;)

mhaj58

How do the ultimate ones even interact with each other. I imagine blue and purple would have property arguments while black and yellow agree to disagree on their concept of logic.

Matthew Lewis Worthington

I mean herald I really liked the part on the nature of time and free will anyways thank you for writing this and your amazing work

Matthew Lewis Worthington

This was amazingggggggggg harold I really loved this chapter


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