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The Perfect Run 130: Farewell, New Rome (Ending & A/N)
🕑 Added 2021-08-31 08:07:39 +0000 UTCLivia had foreseen this moment, but never thought she would live to see it.
The Augusti villa's marble terrace was almost entirely silent, as Enrique Manada signed the fifty-page long treaty. Wyvern and Leo Hargaves sat on his side of the table, while Vulcan and Uncle Neptune assisted Livia. Len Sabino completed the council, looking quite graceful in a summer dress, while Luigi kindly served cocktails and coffee. Eugène-Henry, that spoiled cat, napped near the pool with his belly exposed.
To Livia’s eyes, the new chairman of Dynamis seemed to blur, as multiple possibilities aligned with his real self. Six phantom hands followed his motions. All of them used different signatures, but they signed anyway.
"It is done," Enrique said before closing the document, some other possibilities opening their mouths after the deed was done. "I thus officially announce the creation of the New European Republic."
Dynamis had officially ceased to exist, as did the Augusti's empire. A new structure would rise from their ashes, greater and better than the sum of its parts.
"The United States of Europe would have sounded better though," Leo Hargraves said. His presence still made Livia and her uncle uneasy, but he would soon serve as their go-between with the newborn Republics of Bavaria and Denmark in the north. Though the seer would never quite get along with her mother's murderer, reconciliation was the order of the day.
Gentle Len smiled sheepishly. "No, it wouldn’t have. Sounded good, I mean."
Livia hadn't seen a single possibility where she supported that alternate name.
"I already contacted the French, and they have shown interest in joining us," the seer explained. By which she meant that they would inevitably join the new union, though they would grumble about it first. The French always complained, no matter the timeline. "I believe we could unify all of Western Europe within the next two years."
"I never thought I would see that day," Uncle Neptune said, eyeing Hargraves and Manada warily. "Nor that we would end up sitting around the same table without a fight."
"Things change," Enrique replied, before joining his hands. "Though I do wonder why the architect behind this conference didn't show up."
Livia straightened up on her chair. "He left this morning, and he didn't tell me where."
"I... I couldn't find him either," Len admitted. "I thought he was with Fortuna and the others, but... no."
Livia didn't need a reminder. Fortuna and her boyfriend intended to escort Alchemo to Denmark, so he might cure Mathias' mother of her neural illness. She knew he would succeed, but her best friend would remain abroad for months.
Livia missed Fortuna's presence already. Felix and Narcinia intended to follow her too; the former as a prelude to joining the Carnival full-time, the latter as part of her quest to find out more about her birth parents.
"I still can't believe she chose to call herself Lucky Girl," Vulcan snickered. "That's the laziest superhero name I've heard yet, and that includes yours, Laura."
"You have a point," her former partner took the remark in stride. "Wyvern was a Dynamis brand. We should think of something else."
Vulcan squinted, as she grabbed a drink. "We?"
"I hoped we could form a duo again." Wyvern cleared her throat at Vulcan's hard gaze. "Or at least, give it a try."
Vulcan wordlessly sipped her drink with a sour face.
Wyvern awkwardly shifted on her seat, and Enrique spared her further discomfort. "I've agreed to your proposal about Rust Town's renovation, and to give Miss Sabino complete autonomy on that front," he informed Livia. "The Meta-Gang members who submitted to treatment will join the program, and your donation will cover seventy percent of the budget."
"It might have come from drug money, but these funds will serve a higher cause now," Livia replied with a nod. Finally, she could use her father's ill-gotten resources to do good.
Rust Town's denizens would only be the first to benefit from them. Livia intended to fully fund a Think Tank of Geniuses to help rejuvenate the Earth. The Architect would get to build her self-sustaining cities, Dr. Tyrano's knowledge would be directed towards developing better healthcare, and Vulcan would equip a peacekeeping force to neutralize the Genome warlords ravaging the countryside.
Maybe in time they would introduce Mechron's safe Elixir knockoffs and give everyone the chance to gain superpowers. But that would wait until after Europe had stabilized.
"Why me?" Len asked with a frown, her fingers fidgeting. "Why put me in charge?"
"Because you have lived among the locals and seen their struggles," Enrique replied. "You understand their needs better than I do from my ivory tower. We bear the responsibility for Rust Town's current state, so I don't expect that we will prove adequate at resolving its issues."
"And you have more than earned our trust, Len," Livia added with a bright smile, knowing it would reassure the Genius. After facing so many trials together, the seer almost considered the underwater Genius as a sister-in-law. "You have done more for this place and its orphans than anyone else. You should get recognition for your efforts."
"I..." Len cleared her throat, before offering a thankful nod. "I shall prove worthy of that trust. I swear. For the people of Rust Town."
The rest of the meeting was spent ironing out details about the new order of things, though Livia more or less zoned out. She had already predicted how things would unfold, and so spoke on autopilot. Still, she would rather take that boring, but constructive monotony over a bad surprise.
"Miss Augusti, a question before I leave," Leo Hargraves said, and Livia already predicted what he would say before he even opened his fiery mouth. "How is he doing?"
Livia didn't need to see the future to understand who he was referencing. "My father is..." She cleared her throat. "Alive."
"That's better than he deserves," Wyvern said harshly. "He should be imprisoned in a cell at the bottom of the sea, like his lieutenants."
"My brother is already in a cell," Uncle Neptune replied with a scowl. "One he will never escape."
Livia glanced at a window on the villa's second floor.
Her father was watching the scene through the glass, sitting in a wheelchair. Or at least his eyes gazed at the garden, while his mind wandered elsewhere.
Sometimes, he apologized to Livia, to her mother, to the world. Mostly, he remained silent, or sobbed. Though the body endured, the proud, powerful warlord whom Livia had known all her life had perished in France. Only his ghost remained, trapped in a broken, indestructible body.
Her father would rather have died than live like this, weak and catatonic. And... she knew he would get his wish in less than two years. His daughter had seen it across multiple possibilities. Janus Augusti had triumphed over many powerful foes, but in the end, he couldn't outrun cancer.
In her sleep, Livia had dreamed that her father would set aside his criminal ways, seek repentance, and live the rest of his days in peace. It had been a sweet dream, and she had felt great sorrow upon waking up.
Reality wasn't the ideal ending she had dreamed of, but it was an outcome that she was happy with nonetheless. Ryan had kept his promise and spared her father. She couldn't blame her boyfriend for fulfilling her wish in an unexpected way.
Livia would care for her father for the little time he had left, and mourn for him afterward.
But she wouldn’t pity him.
"I see," Hargraves replied. He understood that Livia's father had paid for his crimes. "In that case, I will take my leave too."
"I believe it is the first time that your Carnival leaves a city with more members than it arrived with," Enrique noted.
The Living Sun nodded. "I will take that as a good sign, and I know our new recruits will prove themselves. Atom Cat will do very well, and the Panda has his heart in the right place."
"I'm still sad to see Felix go," Wyvern said. "He was a good element."
"He was," Livia agreed, though not without some regrets of her own. Though she had moved on from their relationship, she still considered Felix a close friend. Someone with his resolve would have helped make New Rome a better place, but Livia understood that her ex-boyfriend would only truly feel happy on the road, fighting the evils of the world. Felix was born to become a wandering knight, not a nation-builder.
Enrique's group soon left after a few handshakes, leaving Livia alone with Len and her bodyguards. "Fuck her," Vulcan said, once Wyvern was out of earshot. "Fuck her better-than-you attitude."
"You will get to pick the name," Livia pointed out.
"Fuck you too, Nostradamus," the weapon-builder replied. "It's only because you warned me of Daddy Dearest’s intentions that I haven't shot you yet."
"And because I'm a good boss too?" Livia asked mirthfully, having given Vulcan complete autonomy and a large budget to pursue her intellectual interests.
"Don't push it." Vulcan put her drink aside. "Would you even be okay with this?"
“We have become a single government,” Uncle Neptune said, while examining his copy of the European accords. “It doesn’t matter which ministry you choose.”
"We are all friends now," Livia pointed out with a smile.
"You disgust me," Vulcan replied before turning at Len. "Hey, Underdiver."
"Uh, yes?" Len asked with a frown.
"Let's go to my workshop afterward. I've got a great idea, but I'll need a smart assistant to improve it."
Livia gave it a fifty percent chance that Vulcan and Wyvern would end up forming another duo, and forty that they would create a new superhero organization. Beneath all the rage, bitterness, and her inferiority complex, a part of Vulcan had never truly given up on making the world a better place. Her pride would always come first, but now that Wyvern gave her the respect she felt that she deserved, the short-tempered Genius would mellow out in time.
Len's newfound idealism would have a good influence on her too, making Vulcan realize that even her weapon-making power could be used for constructive purposes.
Humans needed to be at least two others to lift each other up.
“It’s really happening,” Uncle Neptune said, as he slouched on his chair. Though he looked very much like Livia’s father, the expression couldn’t be more different. Uncle Neptune was amiable and cautious, with the look of a loving grandfather; while Dad had been a grim and implacable patriarch. “I’ve prayed for this deal for years, and I still half expect it to blow up in our face.”
“It won’t,” Livia reassured him.
“I always told your father that we should go legit, even when we were a normal mob,” her uncle said. “That way of life, it only ever ends up with a coffin or a cell; no matter how powerful you are. Now my brother is dead inside, and my sister imprisoned. I feel like my dreams and nightmares came true all at once.”
Livia knew her uncle was sorely tempted to raise Len’s underwater prison from the depths and free her aunt. In a few possibilities, he almost did.
But he never went through with these plans.
“Auntie doesn’t want to talk to us,” Livia said with regrets. “Not since we refused to break her out.”
“Can’t blame her,” her uncle replied with a sigh. “But better jailed than dead. Do you think she will come around one day?”
“Maybe,” Livia admitted, though the possibilities she had seen were remote. Deep down, her aunt loved to kill. It would take her years of introspection before she could even begin to improve as a person. “But not before many, many years.”
Neptune sighed. “It all feels so bittersweet.”
“Why did you go along with these reforms?” Livia asked her uncle. She predicted a few answers, but she wanted to hear his thoughts from his own mouth. “You never agreed with Father, but you always went along with his wishes.”
“Because I loved him, and I thought I could curb his worst ideas,” Uncle Neptune replied with a shrug. “The family that puts the family first will always prevail over the family that puts the whims of its members first. I love Janus, and my sister too… but you’re our family’s future, Livia. I think the path you chose is the only one where you’ll live a long and happy life. Janus wouldn’t, couldn’t see it, but I do. We old people should make sure younger generations live a better life than our own, not repeat the same mistakes.”
Livia smiled, and bowed. “Thank you, Uncle. For supporting me in these difficult times.”
“It’s only been two weeks and a half since Janus fell, and it feels like years already,” her uncle said with a shrug. “There’s still a lot of things to do ahead of us. Enemies to fight, roads to build. But you can count on me.”
Livia kissed him on the cheek, her uncle smiling in response.
Before she left with Vulcan, Len wanted to ask the seer a question. "Livia..."
"You worry about Ryan," Livia guessed.
"I can't find him, and he doesn't answer on his phone. I'm... I'm worried."
"It's alright," Livia reassured her. Though her knight spent his nights with her, he usually wandered off in the morning to run errands. Or side-quests as he called them.
This time though, she had a pretty good intuition of where he had gone. "I think I know where he is."
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It was May 31st, and the sun set on New Rome.
Sitting at the edge of the promontory, Ryan thoughtfully gazed at the horizon. His legs dangled in the void, while his loyal Plymouth Fury waited behind him with his mask and hat on the hood. The wind brushed against his cashmere suit and his naked face, and his eyes wandered from one district to the next.
Though it had changed, the city looked the same at first glance. All dazzling neon lights and towering skyscrapers, the glorious promise of a new future for mankind. He had spent the whole day marveling at its beauty, watching people living out their lives to the tune of his Chronoradio.
For a full day in a long, long time, Ryan had stopped to enjoy the moment and think. To ponder what he should do next.
He heard a car stop behind him, and peeked over his shoulder. Livia stepped out of a Mercedes, wearing the same red dress as on their first date. The sunlight reflected on her platinum silver hair, and illuminated the smile on her face.
"How did you know I would be here?" Ryan asked his girlfriend with a knowing grin. "I thought you couldn't see me, Miss Augusti?"
"I can't see you, Mr. Romano," she replied with a playful tone, "but I still know how you think."
"I stopped at this promontory when I first came to New Rome, many loops ago," Ryan explained, as she walked to his side. "I heard it was the best view of the city."
"You were lied to," she replied. "Our house has the best sight."
Our house, Ryan thought. Two simple words, and yet they meant so much.
"I thought I would come back to this place after I completed my Perfect Run,” Ryan admitted. “I imagined that I would take one good look at the city, go back to my car, and then drive into the sunset towards new adventures. Maybe with Len in the backseat."
She joined her hands together with a hint of anxiety. "Will you leave?"
"No," Ryan replied, to her relief. "I was only ever comfortable on the road, mostly because that's all I ever knew… but that wasn’t what I wanted.”
“You came for Len. For a friend.”
“I would have been happy if I could at least have one friend who could remember me. I spent centuries on a comedy roadshow, trying to fill the void with entertainment. Trying to stave off the loneliness. And now…”
“Now you’re no longer alone,” Livia said, as she knelt at his side. “And you shall never be again.”
“No. And though the universe is vast and full of wonders… What I want above everything is to spend time with those I love. I see that now.” He chuckled. “I guess I'm old enough to settle down."
She giggled like a young maid. "You sound like my uncle, Ryan."
"I'm eight hundred and sixty years older than you, young woman. I'm a cradle robber."
"Will Grandpa Romano let me climb on his lap then?" She asked him with a coy look.
"Sure, Papa Beaver will tell you a tale." Livia climbed on Ryan's lap, and he put his arms around her. "You've gotten a little heavier."
Livia looked cute when offended. "Are you calling me fat?"
"It's fine, you started a little too skinny," Ryan replied before kissing her on the neck. "But you should stop overeating."
"I will," she said while resting her head against his shoulder. "The stressful days are over now that we've hammered out a constitution. Things will slowly settle into a new, peaceful status quo."
"How peaceful?" Though Ryan enjoyed the current peace, he wouldn't mind a little action in the future.
"As quiet as a republic of Genomes can be... at least for the next few years." She rolled her shoulders. "Afterward, who knows? I foresee dangerous threats, but whether or not these distant possibilities will materialize or not, we won't face them alone."
"About that, I want to talk about the 'we' part." Ryan looked into his girlfriend's eyes. He had thoughtfully considered something, and he wanted to broach the subject with her. "Livia?"
"Yes, Ryan?" she asked, a little anxious.
"Will you marry me?"
She responded with a giggle, her face turning as red as a Communist flag. "Ryan, you already proposed to me."
"Yes, but now I'm serious." She was the one Ryan wanted to share the rest of his life with. He could feel it, deep within his bones.
"I... let's settle on a two year betrothal, alright?" she said with a sheepish smile, as her face regained its original pale complexion. "I love you, Ryan, but I think we're skipping a few intermediary steps. We just moved in together, for God's sake."
Well, Ryan guessed it meant he had the time to prepare for the perfect honeymoon. "And if we stay together for over two years? Because we will, and you know it."
Her face beamed like the sun. "Then I will gladly become Mrs. Romano."
That was what Ryan had hoped to hear. He kissed his girlfriend on the cheek, making her blush. "Hypothetically, how do you feel about having kids?” he asked her. “After we marry, of course."
"I thought you were afraid a child would inherit your powers?"
"I was. But I talked to my Elixir, and it will make sure it won't happen. Though our offspring will probably be even more overpowered than your dad."
"Mmm..." Livia thought about the proposal. "I would love to have children one day, yes."
"And if they're half of me, you won't see them. Or maybe they'll blur your sight?"
"Whether I can predict their actions or not, I would love them all the same." Livia looked at the twilight sun. "Though I draw a blank about what we should call them. Maybe Iris, if we have a girl?"
Ryan suddenly felt a surge of divine inspiration course through his mind. "If it's a boy, how about we call him Eugèn—"
"We are not calling our hypothetical future son after your spoiled cat, Ryan Romano!" Livia exploded in laughter. "You're such a gallant fool."
"And you love me for it."
"I do," she replied softly, before closing her eyes and moving her face closer to his. "I love you, Ryan."
As their lips met in a tender, gentle kiss, Ryan froze time and counted to ten. He wanted to immortalize this moment in his own way.
The world turned violet, the shadow of an eldritch pyramid manifesting over New Rome. The purple reflection of a man running towards the future flickered into sight, joining with Ryan to fuse past and present into a new history.
The last remnants of the Black Particles inside the Violet Genome escaped his body to ascend towards the heavens above... and as they did, visions filled the courier's mind. Wordless pictures as vivid as a lucid dream, fragments of time itself. They flashed one after another in quick succession, all of them showing people the courier had crossed paths with.
He marveled as Len oversaw the cleaning up of Rust Town's atmosphere. The Meta-Gang’s cured members helped clean up the roads, all of them wearing vests with the words 'community service' written on their back. Jerome looked happy with the mundane menial work, while Helen, Vladimir, and Bianca simply accepted it as temporary penance for old crimes. The likes of Mosquito, the Reptilian, and Rakshasa’s gremlins raised new houses without enthusiasm, but had no say in the matter. Rust Town's orphans played with Henriette in a new, green park built over the Junkyard's crater.
He felt satisfaction, as the Olympians and their kind wasted away in an underwater prison far away from civilization. Venus raged in the cell she shared with her husband, while Mars looked through his oceanic window with remorseful acceptance. Pluto read a book with a scowl on her face, while Mortimer, Night Terror, Sparrow and Cancel played a board game in their shared prison. In his own cell, Hector Manada wrote letters asking his son to appeal the courts’ decisions. None would be opened.
He watched Enrique Manada oversee a new team of superheroes, one dedicated to the public good. Wyvern smiled at him while offering a military salute, while Wardrobe gave Jamie, Lanka, and Ki-Jung their new dazzling uniforms. Soldiers stood at their side, making a vow to serve the Republic and its people instead of the almighty Dollar. Vulcan overshadowed them all, wearing a new red power armor worthy of a hero of legends.
He gazed at Alphonse Manada floating aimlessly in the void of space, looking at the Earth with heavy regrets. Maybe one day he would return to it a changed man. He also caught a brief vision of Ghoul’s space cell, and the screaming immortal prisoner within it.
He cheered as he saw Felix, Fortuna, and Shroud fight a vicious Genome warlord as a team... no, a family. Sunshine and the Carnival took care of the mooks, though none kicked more ass than the Panda among them. After they had won, Mr. Wave patted the manbear in the back before offering him a black and white cashmere suit.
He observed Alchemo tend to mentally ill patients in a Danish hospital, with the Doll dressed as a nurse. A blonde woman which Ryan recognized as Mathias' mother exchanged words with a sentient toaster, while a mad priest received medical treatment. One day he would find his sanity back... and perhaps the road to redemption too.
He cheered as Simon, Martine, and Monaco's survivors planted the French flag over the rusted ruins of the Eiffel Tower. Far away, a sphere of reinforced glass isolated a cursed city like a giant snow globe, preventing it from ensnaring anyone ever again.
He watched Narcinia plant a garden in a greenhouse, one that would one day feed millions of people across Europe. His vision expanded to reveal a new shining city over the ruins of Sarajevo, its construction overseen by the Architect herself. Mighty humanoid dinosaur workers carried the building material.
He glanced at a strange rabbit running in a purple world, and a blob of darkness floating amidst the void. Both waiting for him beyond the veil of time, until the end of all things.
“THIS IS THE FUTURE YOU FOUGHT FOR.” The Ultimate One’s voice echoed across time and space, as it vanished from Ryan’s sight. “IT MAY COME TO PASS, OR IT MAY NOT. IT IS ALL UP TO YOU.”
Maybe the deity meant these visions to serve as a warning not to slack off, or as an encouragement to carry on. But whatever the case, Ryan loved what he saw.
His save complete, time resumed at once, yet the kiss continued. Livia's lips tasted of strawberry, of love and passion.
They tasted of home.
And like all good things in this world, the kiss ended way too soon. The couple exchanged one shy glance, and then watched the sun vanish behind the horizon.
Ryan Romano had completed his Perfect Run.
And he was happy at last.
THE END
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THANKS FOR COMPLETING THE PERFECT RUN!
[GAME CREDITS]
Author, Game Designer, and Level Designer - Maxime J. Durand, aka Void Herald.
Beta Tester and Proofreader - Daniel Zogbi.
Cover Artist - Vitaly S. Alexius.
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A/N: and so it ends.
First of all, I would like to offer special thanks to my long-time editor and proofreader, Daniel Zogbi, whose invaluable feedback greatly helped in making The Perfect Run the novel it is today.
As far as I remember, I always had a peculiar relationship with time. One of my first story ideas involved a man with the ability to see the remaining ‘hours’ of people before their death. I always wondered what would have happened if I could relive my life, make different decisions, etc… I believe everyone has wondered the same at one point or another.
I also pondered how it would feel to relive one’s life again and again. What kind of person someone trapped in an eternal recurrence would grow into? Would they go mad, or achieve some kind of enlightenment and state of content acceptance, as Nietzsche believed? Is there a force greater than us that predetermines our actions, some cosmic order behind the randomness of existence?
I ended up writing The Perfect Run partly to examine these questions in an entertaining way… and because I’m a huge fan of time-loop stories, but couldn’t find one set in a superhero universe. I always found it weird, like, like superheroes are popular, time-loops too, so why did nobody combine them?
Anyway, so... what was planned, and what wasn’t? I always had the ending in mind. I knew The Perfect Run would always end up with Ryan dueling Augustus and having a chat with the Ultimate One about the nature of time. The Bloodstream case, the long-term romance with Livia, the nature of Elixirs and the Alchemist, Darkling, all of these were planned from the beginning.
Other things came organically, like the original Jasmine/Ryan romance or the entire Meta-Gang Run (probably the run I had the most fun writing). I had intended to give Lanka and Jamie a greater role, but in the end the Panda, Wardrobe and Felix seized more focus because of their chemistry with Ryan. I feel like the plot should always take a backseat to organic character interactions, because in the end, it’s the people inside a story who make it feel real.
Some believed that the story would end with Ryan’s final death, but The Perfect Run was never about an immortal man looking to end his eternal life. It was about a gamer achieving his perfect ending; an immortal finding meaning and happiness. It’s no coincidence that Ryan becomes less maniacal as the story goes, and his loops last longer. He starts not caring about anything but his entertainment, numbing his emotional pain with adrenaline, and slowly rediscovers his humanity. By the end, he has fought something worth fighting for, and he is no longer alone. He has found a family in Len, a lover in Livia, and friends in the people he met in New Rome.
Ryan has found something to live for.
That was always the point of the ending: that life is beautiful and worth fighting for. That people can lift each other up to reach a brighter future.
So is this the end of the Perfect Run universe? Well, probably not. I’ve actually been in love with the idea of a Leaf & Seed spinoff for a while (basically a Metroid/western fusion, with a badass female Genius wandering the ruins of post-Genome War America with her plucky unpowered sidekick), and I will certainly propose the concept with the next story poll. But that will wait until after either Kairos or Underland are finished, and of course, it will only be a story choice among others. We’ll see.
As for Ryan? Well, much like Vainqueur or Walter Tye, his story is done. He has reached the best ending he could, tied up all loose ends, and defeated his strongest enemy. If he reappears in a spinoff, it would be as a secondary character. I have finished the story I wanted to tell, and it’s time to let Ryan Romano enjoy his rest.
Because he WILL marry Livia, they WILL start a family, and they WILL live happily ever after.
For those of you who want a pdf version of the story, I added the second volume (up to chapter 91) on the Dracolich ebook post here, though it's not yet released on Kindle so that you may download it: https://www.patreon.com/posts/48625485 ; the third volume will unfortunately need more editing work before I feel safe in releasing a downloadable version.
So… thanks everyone. Thanks for following this strange story all the way to its conclusion. I hope it gave you great joy, many laughs, and helped open your mind. I wish you a great day, and I will see you again for Underland.
Best regards,
Your friend Voidy.
Comments
Gimro
Congratulations on the completed story! One of my favorites of all time! Great power system!
Karthic
you continue to be a phenomenal writer - but I’m most impressed by how you have Continued to develop your craft over the past several years. I’ve been following you for a very long time and am looking forward to a long future
Richter Stormstrike
Oh MAN what a story. Satisfying ending over perfect ending every time. He didn't accomplish everything he tried, but god DAMN did Ryan tie everything up neatly. ...Also it's really funny that Augustus really did notice EVERY SINGLE TIME Ryan froze time. But yes! A beautiful read. And once it's out in the public, I'm going to recommend this to EVERYONE I know that loves good stories.
Nathan Camussi
Thank you so so much for the ride!!! I kind of heartbroken: for me Ryan is my hero, I really feel more happy like I’m enjoying my days way more than before. Yeah it’s a bit weird but this story just make me happy. I loved everything from the joke to the action; I think that the world building was freaking amazing. Well, I just think I fell in love with your writing and Ryan. (I love you void : « I will always be your reader ») :]]] PS: wish I could say « always have been » but I believe it’s never too late.
Ashlee Jacobsen
I am curious about mister wave in qubec if it ever strikes your fancy
SnuggleCat
Is there any chance you could write a story about their children?
Ashlee Jacobsen
This was worth the $14 I paid! Thankyou! Now onto the next story!
Gian
Thank you so much for allowing us witness Ryan's glorious struggle. The whole story was amazingly written with each character brimming with unique personality. The Perfect Run is such a satisfying read. Cheers Mr. Void Herald
Paradoxez Novel Reader
Thanks for the chapter. This series was among my top ten favorite in royalroad but it is now unquestionably #1st place for me. I just love the characters interactions so much. And Ryan x Livia will remain the best unexpected but pleasant surprise late romance that I didn't see it coming haha.
A few other questions I wanted to ask: Would Ryan ever try to cure Monaco with the psycho treatment for a permanent solution? Or is the entity too far gone? What kind of power combination would Fortuna and Matthias' child have if they decided to have one? Something tells me that Fortuna's charm would make sure that they got the best power possible. I also want to know what ultimately happens to Wardrobe if she stays too long as another Genome. It's heavily lampshaded that she'd lose her mind and go on a rampage if she stayed too long as Cthulhu in one of the world ending loops, but I'm not sure if it's because the target was Cthulhu who's kind of mind whammy in the first place, or it happens with any other target Genome because it's a feature. What if it was a virtuous one like Leo Hargraves?
"Humans needed to be at least two others to lift each other up." this sentence reads funny. Think the grammar is a little off here.
Blaffey
Sad to see this end but it was fantastic! Would be happy to see any short stories in this world.
I would love to see some little "What if" short stories some day about other possible endings, if you ever thought it might be fun to write. I'm sad to see it end, but thanks for creating one of my favorite books
Void Herald
Thank you very much, I hope it helped in Year of Stay-At-Home ;)
Void Herald
Yeah, the whole story was something like Ryan's therapy, where he starts truly off the deep end and slowly works his way up to stability. Ultimately, much like how Len worked her way back from the abyss of depression I believe though intense self-reflection helps, social support is essential to improve one's mental health.
Void Herald
You're welcome.
Void Herald
Perfect Ending?
Void Herald
Well, he fulfilled all the side objectives and achieved the perfect ending ;)
Void Herald
Well, glad it worked out. The Perfect Run was a lot more character based than system based compared to my other stories, and I'm glad it worked out ;)
Void Herald
Thank you very much ;)
Void Herald
Thanks. Well, Patron doesn't make it easy to download my patron list at a given moment, and an excel list is the best I can get.
Void Herald
By that point, he makes like half of RR's covers XD
Void Herald
You're welcome!
Void Herald
You are too kind, and I'll strive to :)
Void Herald
Thanks!
Void Herald
Well, it could have always happened if it made sense organically, but I preferred to keep the GF Jasmine erased so readers could feel the same pain as Ryan. It would have had less impact if she had come back.
Thank you for this excellent journey. I was just wondering, but was there ever an alternate possibility where Jasmine, or Ryan's Jasmine, could have eventually ended up as his chosen partner? In whatever fashion, except the harem one.
Thanks Void yet another brilliant story, looking forward to the new project. Love this.
Callum Brocklehurst
Love your work buddy. Youre an amazing author and i hope you feel proud in the stories you share. Keep up the great work.
Matthew Lewis Worthington
Thanka void
Erriballon
Honestly your story was beautiful . it made Mondays feel so long and Tuesday so fun and short thanks you. You have mad this past couple of year better with your story's . Thanks
Enzo Elacqua
I love it. While usually an ending like this would give me diabetes, I feel like it has always lead up to this. Much like with He Who Fights With Monsters, there is an awareness of mental health and how to deal with it. If in Ryan’s perfect run after studying psychology and going to therapy for probably centuries it would be weird if his mental health wasn’t included in it. Thanks for everything and I look forward to reading the Underland
Wyv
Wonderful story, wonderful closure. Thanks for this.
Glorious ending
Void Herald
I intended to give him a new Blue power to represent the fact his wish changed, which would have been a Danger Sense but applied to others; so he would instantly know if one of his friends or a person he had touched was in imminent danger. This would have represented the fact he no longer feels he needs to learn to become a hero (which his enhanced learning represented) and now fully believes that he can help others. You can consider it his new canon power now ;)
Ervin Ughy
Absolutely loved this story. The ending was just perfect. One question though. What kind of second power will the Panda get? It was mentioned, that his blue elixir could be saved from Adam's pocket dimension. Is he going to get the same learning power, or ask for a different blue power, or take a different colored elixir?
Thank you for this awesome story! I loved the ending because it fits perfectly with what Ryan was trying to achieve.
Set
Thanks for the happy ending, early on I was worried he would just kill himself in the end. Could have been good but I’d rather happy characters. Also I’d suggest adding commas between patron names at the end of the PDF, it was hard to read them all when I couldn’t tell where they started and ended.
Josh Enterman
Bravo! I absolutely loved this story! The premise and concept were intriguing, but it was the incredible character interaction and dialogue that kept me enthralled till the end.
N0T0B0K
Ah, the cover was made by the creator of Romantically Apocalyptic? Nice
Finn Ryan
I don't normally comment on Patreon, but I just wanted to say thank you. What started as a nice little popcorn fun series I started because it was on popular on royal road, has turned into something I really enjoy each time it releases. The characters felt real and their growth felt natural. Thank you for putting so much effort into this story and know that I appreciate it
Void Herald
Thanks!
Void Herald
Thanks, well all things end before the march of time. Let's be happy that it happened, even if it ended ;)
Void Herald
Thank you very much, I'm happy that story brightened your day. My hope was that it would make people laughs and give them courage to carry on.
Void Herald
Ah, well Adam was heavily inspired by Jim Jones (especially the Jonestown tape; most chilling I ever heard), so unfortunately there are people like him running around... but they don't die in their sleep. I'm glad you enjoyed the story to the finish line ;)
Void Herald
Nah, Livia would have foreseen it ;)
Void Herald
Thanks. Well he is a gamer from before twitch, so his references are a bit different ;)
Void Herald
You're welcome.
Void Herald
A D&D godly session? Who knows, maybe one day ;)
Void Herald
Thanks! I was a bit worried that the ending might give some readers diabetes, but I'm glad it worked out.
Bon Bon
Clap :3
Adrian Engel
Wow... It's done, Ryan's story is over. Well... Like I said before, this is a happy and sad moment. I'm glad everything ended the way it did but boy will I miss everyone. Thanks Voidy for the amazing work. I'm honored I was able to ride along for the last 8 months. Time marches on and with it a new story, I will be here for that one too. Congrats Void Herald on another job well done!
Ethan
What a story. I've been following you from the end of Vainiquer, and when this first popped up in my RR feed, and I saw you were the author, I knew I had to check it out. I can't count how many times I was burnt out from work here in Korea, only to catch a surprise chapter from this and it brightened my day. I lasted twenty chapters in before I couldn't wait anymore, and absolutely had to read more. From the bottom of my heart, thank you for the stories you've presented us.
Soren
I said my praise in the previous chapter post but I have to add that this ending was great. I usually have such a high bar for characters but I liked every single one, from the mooks to the villains. None felt out of place in the world and especially the villains felt exactly how I imagine already evil people would act given their powers (Adam made me shudder a lot, holy shit) I think this is the most enjoyable book that I've read in a while. Definitely cracks the top 3 ever.
Deinos
Wouldn't it be funny if some unlikely disaster struck seconds after he saved? Like the guy with the time-reset box that got triggered half a second before a bus catches him.
Young Youghurt
But is Ryan truly a gamer? He never said poggers. Gamers rise up! This is truly an epic victory royale of finale in our time. Thank you
Ricky Brent
Wow. This was such a great story ... thank you!
MaliMi
Thanks for the story. At one point I would probably love to have a story in a multiverse, where the godly side characters are the main characters of your previous books.
Avaritia
Epic story! Crazy how I still remember seeing it way back on Royal Road so long ago with barely any chapters. One of the most interesting stories I've read, and I can say with certainty that you NAILED this ending!!
Void Herald
Thank you my friend ;)
Void Herald
Thanks!
Void Herald
How about eldritch extradimensional otters for Underland? ;)
mhaj58
Perfect ending. I just read Reroll on royal road and recommend it to anyone who loved this great story. See you in underland
Summercat
Hey. Thank you for the story. It's been a wild ride, and, well. My only complaint is the same as always: No otters. ;)
Nicholas Pankratz
Thank you for the amazing story! This was such a thrill to read, start to finish!
