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Kairos 77: Wrap-up

🕑 Added 2021-10-23 08:02:10 +0000 UTC

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Void Herald

You'll see next chapter ;)

sri kalyan mulukutla

so will he take the quest from fates before or after the dungeon dive?

Void Herald

Oops, indeed nice catch! Corrected, thanks.

Juli Freixi

@Void Herald "Class: Spellcaster (Pyromancer, Witch, Storm Caller, Shapeshifter, Necromancer)" Not Telchine?. . Well, thanks a lot for the chapter!!

Void Herald

My opinion is that conflict is important to a story, but CONSTANT conflict burns out everyone. Happy, peaceful moments are just as important as tense ones. As for Orgonos, he's something of a counterpart to the old gods: namely, proving gods can be genuinely good and helpful like Prometheus before him. I think it sends a more powerful message than having all deities in the story be assholes ;)

Enzo Elacqua

This is a nice wrap to this whole bit. I’m taking a creative writing class and something my professor keeps saying is that everything needs to have conflict, it’s what drives the plot and keep it interesting. But I feel that if there are no moments like this one with Órganos, it would show the shallowness of the world. Nothing comes easy, but sometimes things have a way of working out. And that’s the best way to go about showing a deep realistic world.


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