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Kairos 18: Land of Monsters

🕑 Added 2021-03-16 07:12:08 +0000 UTC

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Void Herald

Yep, small error. Corrected, thanks.

Daniel Bessette

Nessus shook his head. “I told you the western ruins smelled of a cleanup.” I think you meant the eastern ruins?

Void Herald

I see your points, but a few things to answer. For the first point, my intent was to illustrate a problem that all commanders face at one point: namely, controlling their troops and dealing with allies over whom they don't have full authority. Kairos has moved from captain to an aspiring leader, but is now faced with difficulties like keep problematic elements in check; while he wants to be pragmatic and measured, he works with captains who in general have no problem following a 'rape, pillage, and burn' policy. That behavior is exactly the problem with Travia, and a core element of Kairos' development is his attempt to reform his people from a confederation of bandits into a true nation that can peacefully coexist with its neighborhoods. The contrast is intentional.

Sahil

this novel made me sign up on patreon. Some things I want to say- 1) I personally am not the reader who likes reading stories where the mc is pillaging and raping. This being a pirate tail has all those but Kairos being greedy as he is and not wanting to personally do the deed instead choosing to watch others inflict such actions will only go so far. This both sides kind of thing I feel is a weak point for the mc's character. i hope the character growth settles him down on 1 path. 2) I feel you have given the mc a lot of benefits too quickly. The first adventure we see the mc has he gains a Legend that is very hard to acquire. Second adventure he contracts the Scylla a creature who feasts on pirate ships way more powerful than Kairos' team when they attacked her hideout. Mc then also gets the phoenix feather, he then slays a sea beast that wrecks any and all fleets. Has a living ship. He also burns towns successfuly and he now is running his own village/town on a new island. All of this in the span of 18 chapters. It kind of makes these rare difficult opportunities feel too cheap and easy to obtain. In Perfect Run Ryan being an op char was established right from the start. Him jumping around everywhere, battling opponents of all tiers makes sense. Here I feel it is a bit too easy considering Kairos' strength. Novel is still fantastic I wouldnt have subbed otherwise.

I love the story so far but I find myself turned off a bit by how greedy Kairos is at times. I'd like to see him show a bit more humility or thought before in his actions instead of gold fever. His ambition seems entirely selfish. If I thought it was for more than himself I would be ok but it just seems like he wants power and wealth, damn the consequences and collateral damage

Arroww

j'adore ton histoire, j'espère qu'elle va durer un petit bout de temps! Keep up the good work man!

Max Müller

seems like kairos is gonna have a rough few weeks ahead of him

Void Herald

You must undertake a Quest first ;)

Void Herald

You're welcome. Yay, I was in the process of editing that when you pointed it out XD corrected, thanks.

Imran

Thanks! >I arrived on a colon ship colony

Puri Iresan

He is on this Island for a reason.

MaliMi

Kairos seems too greedy and foolish at the end of this chapter.

crownfall

where can I sign up to receive this intravenously


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