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Kairos 31: I Live, I Die, I Live Again

🕑 Added 2021-05-08 08:08:46 +0000 UTC

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Subliminary

Isn’t that the entire point of Greek mythology? Gods are pricks, powerful entities abound, and mere mortals such as Kairos have no hope. Never meant to and typically never did.

Joel Sasmad

I mean the Oddessy literally only had Odesseus survive...

mhaj58

One thing I find very annoying about the story is how Kairos endeavors all end up a piece in someone else's game. Castor, the witches, and Mithridates all end up using him and getting away with it. The story feels less like a Greek legend and more like a medieval art

Robert

In addition to my earlier comment. This story is drawing heavy inspiration from greek myth, and while they had their fair share of set backs none of them were as hopelessly outmatched as this poor crew.

Robert

Many many people have said things similar to what my thought process is. But a casualty rate of 30% is abysmal and as far as I can remember that is about what Kairos has had in basically every outing. As far as I am concerned his legend is done at this point. Nobody in their right mind should want to follow him with his track record. If this were a setting where death and bodily harm were an easy fix it would be different, but as it stands it this has completely broken my suspension of disbelief.

Kyle Pemberton

It just feels like every victory has resulted in him taking 1 step forward and 2 steps back in the last 10 chapters. I'm not saying there should be no pyrrhic victories but morale is a reality of any fighting force. And the shit that has happened to Karios recently should destroy the morale of his men.

Kyle Pemberton

Come on. We're not asking him to make every battle a straight victory. But one every now and then is not unreasonable. With what I've read so far I feel like one of his crew, with terrible morale and little hope for this guy to get his shit together.

Void Herald

Corrected, thanks.

Jordan

His last couple “victories” have been rather pyrrhic in nature, he lost his nearly whole fleet then his hostage was murdered at his wedding and then he got manhandled by the Argonauts although this one wasn’t quite as bad as it seemed last chapter. It makes sense that people think the story has gotten bleak, I don’t mind though. Hoping they take advantage of all the monster bones in the Karkino’s cave to upgrade the ship

David Cohen

I don't think it so much that he not winning, it is that it is so one sided against him. He is doing that" im not as smart as I should or people believe I am bit" I see in so many stories to facilitate the action. The story is good. He just needs to act a little smarter and not be destroyed in every conflict. He does need some more wins but that isn't the point. As a former soldier myself, with his track record as stated before id be NOPE nOPE NOPING out of his crew. Better to grab a row boat and work my own plan with paper wads and a rubber band.😁 But I do really like the story and can't wait for more and to see where it goes. Remember that the Myths you are basing t his on have had more than a few years of editing and rewrites to work out the kinks before we ever read them!😃😆🤣 Your writing and ability to put your thoughts into words that inspire the imagination on a bad day is [HERO] compared to my ability to write a grocery list on my most [INSPIRED] day. Thank you and keep up the great works!

Matthew Lewis Worthington

I dont get why people think that but honestly I love the story and how realistic it is like first off he should fail I think stories that dont have failure are too common and feel out of touch but including failure allows us to see how the character will grow something like this is amazing and I really like how you portray him and his rise and how accurate you show the difference in power anyways thanks for the update

Imran

Thanks! >let their enemies die and alive weaken each other let their enemies, dead and alive, weaken each other

sri kalyan mulukutla

Yeah it seems MC is a bigger risk taker than his uncle.

Julien Fellegara

I can now understand why Heracles was here. We were all stupid, because you did not make a mistake by giving Jason too much power. It is just that the last chapter take sens when you read this one. Well done !

Young Youghurt

Don't they have some witchers in Greece?

Chaos' Crowl Kanigami

B-but I like the bleakness! It would feel a bit too light if it wasn't as bleak imo

Deinos

I don't know who said the story would be bleak, I very much like it. I find it refreshing that the characters are not static fixtures.

Anton Lupanov

For me the most jarring thing was not bleakness or the defeat itself, but this sequence of events: Kairos bites more than he can chew (the fleet), loses people -> Kairos vows to never make this mistake again -> Kairos goes and immediately makes the same mistake again (Argo), loses people.

Jdosnoen

What, keep it bleak lmao. This is a masterpiece

sri kalyan mulukutla

No straight victories please! RR is filled with those empty crap stories. Take your time, mortals only become heroes after mulling over their problems and finding answer.

BananaInMyPants

I agree, this isn't even really that bleak either. It's just the down before the up for Kairos' hero journey.

Max Müller

is it only me or are all the pointers poiting to the head of the daughters of circe being medea?

Rheklr

It may be bleak, but I like the tone you've struck with Kairos.

MaliMi

Although this story seems bleak, I do not think you have to give Kairos more straight victories as for me the bleakness is one of the charms of the story. Although I vainly hoped Rhadamante would survive, now I am even more excited about his origins and his faith. This story is based on Greek mythology and they are pretty bleak.

Slim Dakhch

also before your authors note i was expecting a way longer book, which makes sense since ur going for the trilogy, and hercules as a bad guy is overkill endgame lvl shit, cause otherwise, we'll be expecting outright godslaying at end of book 3 if you beat him in book one already. like he is a literall one man army. ps as a greek mythology fan(and god of war super fan), i always want the main character to be like kratos, so a little more OPness for the captain will always please me. once again thx for the chapter and subtle remainder to add cass to the harem.

mhaj58

I think it's because the characters die too quickly that the story feels bleak. Panos, Eios, Cassandra and now Radamanthe all died so suddenly as if they were NPCs rather than characters in a story. I don't think all their deaths were bad for the story, but Kairos is supposed to be intelligent and educated. It doesn't make sense that he gets his best men killed over and over again. That lesson should stick the first time.

Sahil

Hmm people might have said its bleak because until now all of kairos' victories have been him dragging himself and crew to the finish line. If I were on Kairos' crew id have noped out after Histria. He's taking on stuff above what he can handle and im amazed there isn't a mutiny or people deserting him right now. There's only so many deadly situations a person can handle. I am curious had we voted for Artifact hunt instead of ghost ship then would it have been a more light hearted quest? Is it still in book 1? But the story flowed in such a way that ship arc made most sense first. Its not about straight victories or giving more downtime from combat to flesh out chars to make it appear less bleak... I personally feel its about Kairos seemingly making bad choices again and again even after being on the verge of life and death making it feel like he hasnt learnt much from previous encounters. Cant blame Kairos he was getting pushed around to do stuff before this quest but it feels like he should have done more research for this one for sure. Like Cass got the quest way earlier when she was way weaker so if it could be completed then then Kairos should have thought more now when he tried to attempt it.


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