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The Perfect Run 98: White Night

🕑 Added 2021-05-15 08:02:43 +0000 UTC

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MacDB

I feel like Livia is the best option for end game material, and there relationship with their power interaction is perfect. It’s a shame that Ryan is the one who will probably have to kill her father (the parallels with len is depressing), so he may lose her in the end.

Thundertruck

I mean it would be kinda difficult for Livia to completely forget considering her ability. She just wouldn’t have had those experiences and probably wouldn’t believe that they happened.

Void Herald

Oh good catch, yeah that's an error that slipped through. Edited, should work better now.

SugarRoll

Livia shouldn't have been surprised about Ryan living a full life in Monaco. Ryan already told her in chapter 75 in the motel with Luigi

Void Herald

Thanks!

Xegzy

This one has gotta be one of my favorites

Marcus Österberg

For this quality of chapters I would be fine with 1 chapter a month. Take care of yourself!

Adrian Engel

Okay, if this ship sinks like his past relationships I will cry. These two are perfect together, please no amnesia... 😰

Void Herald

Corrected, thanks.

SugarRoll

I love the chapter. Man, I'm emotionally invested now. I don't think I can handle another failed relationship by amnesia.

Trespitry

Of course, Ryan could have always spent money, but a cashmere suit wasn’t brought. --> a cashmere suit wasn’t bought "Ryan offered Livia a sushi box, and sticks to go with it." -->Sticks refer to chopsticks, right? In my mind, I associate sticks differently than chopsticks, so it was a bit confusing to me at first. “I thought I already beat you to the gloomy confessions?” he asked, tightening his hold on his chest, his cheek brushing against her neck. --> I am not sure how he could tighten his hold on his chest. Is this supposed to be her chest?

Void Herald

Spoiler, next chapter's title is "How I Met Your Daughter" ;)

MaliMi

Eagerly awaiting lightning butt's response.

Alaine

That was a really nice chapter. I never thought anyne could pull of multiple romances in a loop story but you did it. It does not feel forced nor does it feel like the romance with jasmine gets overshadowed. So thanks for the chapter!

mhaj58

What a chapter this is beyond words to describe how great this story feels. Love you 3000


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