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Blood & Fur Chapter 9: How to Win Friends and Influence People

🕑 Added 2023-06-15 08:05:07 +0000 UTC
Blood & Fur Chapter 9: How to Win Friends and Influence People

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Void Herald

Corrected, thanks.

Orm

over Ingrd’s song -> Ingrid's

Void Herald

My intention was to show he didn't forgive her then, but he did feel a brief moment of empathy for her ;) but yeah rewrote it to something that should make it clearer. Glad you're enjoyed it, more coming on Saturday!

CatInAPot

I think you should change the line in Ch.7, "In that moment, I completely forgot all the insults, all the stoning, all the wrongs she inflicted upon me. She had paid for them and then some." Forgetting for a moment, sure. The debt is obviously not paid though. It clashes with “I will never forgive you for all the years of abuse,” I warned her. “But for the sake of our mutual survival, and for Eztli, I will try to look past it.” Necahual's personal tragedy doesn't absolve her for her treatment of Iztac in the past, and I much prefer this direction where he keeps struggling with that trauma. Regardless though, I absolutely adore this story, very much looking forward to more.

Void Herald

The fate of Iztac's father will be partially addressed next chapter but don't worry, Iztac hasn't forgotten him ;) Sigrun will be a major character in the waking world from now on.

mhaj58

Nice to see Necahual finally getting retribution for her abuse. Little has been said about Itzili. Is he at peace in the underworld? Did Iztacs mom steal his soul? Will he appear in the story at any point? Also worth mentioning that Sigrun exceeded expectations in a big way. Hope to see more of her Saturday


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