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Commerce Emperor Chapter 17: The Hill of Fire

🕑 Added 2023-07-27 07:38:37 +0000 UTC
Commerce Emperor Chapter 17: The Hill of Fire

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Pierre Steiner

Honestly battles are one of the hardest parts of a story to write in my experience as a reader, there is so much to consider, so much precision work and details to sprinkle everywhere. I would rather the context and plot advancements linked to said battle be flawless and logical, not forced or otherwise unbelievable, than the battle to be perfectly executed and every move to be well polished. I think this one falls very clearly in the first category : if a few minor details might benefit from being more subtly introduced, it's way more than good enough

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Thank you :)

George R

awesome story


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