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Blood & Fur Chapter 22: The Sulfur Sun

🕑 Added 2023-09-09 07:40:46 +0000 UTC
Blood & Fur Chapter 22: The Sulfur Sun

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Void Herald

More like a candle being suddenly surrounded by night ;)

Hussar L

“Thick shadows as warm as blood swallowed the light of my Gaze spell” if First Emperor was dog, Iztac’s light of embers was peanut butter, I imagined it was like First Emperor licking up peanut butter Iztac smeared on the opening lol

Void Herald

Thanks :) well I think a story needs an end in mind, or at least a plan where the heroes 'win' (for a certain definition of it) at the start; if there's no central goal the plot just meaders around XD

Stultus

I was just pondering on your stories in general, and I'd like to compliment you on your "planning". Your books don't overstay their welcome or ever drag on. Blood & Fur has a set timeline - one year and things will end one way or another. Vainqueur had the level 100 cap, The Perfect Run had the defeat of Lightning Zeus. You keep your plots within a timeline, and I find I much prefer them over rambling long stories that are so common on RoyalRoad. While long stories do have their upsides, i can count on one hand the number of books I've read on RoyalRoad that were actually finished. Cheers to you. :)


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