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Apocalypse Tamer 41: Man vs Man

🕑 Added 2022-07-26 07:10:05 +0000 UTC

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crue

About time Basil started becoming more serious with his distribution of levels, only happens after you lose enough party members.

Tim Deral

You usually don't kills characters and I like that you start experimenting with it, albeit with minor characters. It creates more narrative tention. Good chapter 👍

Void Herald

For the first part, Orcine's idea was to blitzkrieg the knight quickly so he would never get the chance to activate Revenge at all (he can always hurt himself to make it work after all). That's not the best plan, no, and it's not supposed to be. Orcine is no strategist ;) but the lack of discussion on the Perk will come later when I said Basil would think more carefully about class leveling/the System in general. He'll realize that if he had actively questioned Orcine/Vasi about their systems in-depth, or if they had drilled for battle BEFORE attacking the dungeon, then they would have been better prepared. It'll change his approach. They were flanking opposite to the vegetables yes; should have made that clearer, I'll edit it. For halberd, remember Basil is superhumanly fast and strong; it's no different than a one handed axe/spear in his hand ;)

Sickul

Don't mind characters dying, and I liked them, but wasn't a real surprise as neither felt like core members yet. Now killing Bugsy, that would have been controversial and had a big impact.

Daniel Bessette

Hold up a giant freaking massive second. Last chapter, Basil wanted to ignore the knight, and focus on the other characters first, but Orcine said they had to attack and try to kill the knight first specifically because of his perk, which she knew about. But....his perk only works if you attack him! That doesn't make any sense! They only attacked him and activated his perk because Orcine said so! If they'd avoided him like Basil wanted, or she just explained that his perk lets him retaliate damage, some of the worse outcomes might have been avoided. Also a bit confused about how Basil deflected a dagger headed towards Vasi when they were flanking, and on opposite sides? Unless I guess they were both flanking together opposite from the vegetables. And physically speaking, a halberd seems like a slightly awkward weapon to deflect thrown projectiles with. Anyhow, fun chapter.

Deinos

I like that people die!... maybe that came out wrong.. I like that it keeps its realism and you don't shy away of letting close members perish.

Alric Good

Good chapter i think the deaths were fine side characters with an emotional pull but not seriously detrimental if theyre gone

Void Herald

In retrospect, I think the problem with the Jason fight is that I introduced Heracles' spirit then; it would have been much better received if it had just been Jason and Hero-Rank argonauts.

mhaj58

Great chapter. Reminds me of Kairos vs Jason round 1 with much better execution and realism. No downs means no ups and I’m hoping Basil gets up again soon


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