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Pilot: Writer of the End

🕑 Added 2025-08-05 08:39:27 +0000 UTC
Pilot: Writer of the End

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Lucy Severine

Got around to reading this for the new poll, and I agree with some of the other replies; the litrpg stuff feels unnecessary, and I think it feels a little... Hmm. Disjointed? I honestly think you've set him up as too powerful a character initially and that the story would be better with that more horror tone you mentioned. Maybe not as wide-spreadly popular, but a more... Memorable story for those who ARE fans of it?

Vik M.

I like what you have here, but I'd probably need a chapter where he starts doing the job he signed up for before i decide whether I'd stick with it or not. The setting is interesting, the concept of Mortalities and Classes is compelling, and although the MC seems like a bit of a stick in the mud, he doesn't seem like a complete misanthrope, so I'd be happy to see more of him.

Publius Decius Mus

I finally got around reading this. I love it, and I think this will do well with people who liked B&F, but I don't think it will do better on KU than B&F, if you are aiming for that. Edit suggestion: A Librarian’s Reading Comprehension passive allowed -> word missing

Val

I like it but i liked class action more and its wierd because I usually go for mage and book arquetypes

Côme Roy

I love the premise very much, the world building seems promising. I like the fact that the main character already has a story to tell and doesn't seem driven by a singular goal.


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