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Undercover ASSignment: Omega Update
🕑 Added 2018-04-13 19:06:03 +0000 UTC As I've posted earlier in the week, I've been thinking about restructuring and editing the movie a little bit. It's over 20 minutes long, and aside from being more difficult to make, it just doesn't seem necessary. I want to edit some of the longer scenes so the movie is more like 16-18 minutes long.Additionally, SFM is actually really glitchy when copying key frames out over long scenes. That hasn't really been an issue in a while because I've mostly been doing short loops. It's pretty frustrating with longer scenes though.
Scenes 1, 2, 9, and 13 are particularly long. For example, the scene 1 preview I've posted is actually only the first part of the scene. I'd like shorter scenes to get to the main action a lot faster, so the script could use some more editing. There are some other scenes I think could be edited as well, but I'd like some feedback.
I think priority is shortening those longer scenes, but popularity might help editing other ones. Which scenes are your favorites, which are your least favorites?
Comments
Malgus26
I agree with this
Supreme Overlord Llama
I personally like the order of things since it feels more natural since it's gangbang so Miranda is some what rotating different Aliens all the time. As for favorite scenes, these to me stand out the most for either the sex act, the dialogue, or how the whole scene just plays out: 14, 11, 9, 6, 5, 2. I don't know if I actually have a least favorite but I guess this scenes I am not to concerned about if they are shortened: 1, 4, 8, 13.
Arivael
So in terms of trimming, scenes 1 and 2 are your best candidates, given that I suspect most people want to see Miranda on the alien cock more than the human. As to the scene order, 10 would make more sense if it came after all the Krogen were done, so move it to be scene 13 and move 11, 12 and the current 13 to 10, 11 and 12 respectively. That said with the current scene 11, having the two Bartarin scenes split like that, while it fits the dialog and makes and point about how two smaller in one are more than one large but that could be rolled into the earlier Bartarian scene with some dialog changes, make it more about debasement than commenting on size and stretching.
Malgus26
I think all of them are fine but the decision is ultimately up to you...I just can't wait to see Miranda pounded hard by everyone.....really looking forward to this
Derples
Scene 10 can be dropped. Other than that, if you kept the other scenes to a minute or a minute and a half, it would be better
Damn Quixote
Imo, scenes 4, 6, 10 & 11 could be cut and it would flow a lot better. That way it progresses nicely from humans to Turians to Krogan to multiple Krogan and then finally Elcor before the big bukkake finish. Batarians are basically humans model wise, so focusing on them feels redundant. Vorcha following Krogan feels unnecessary and interrupts the nice escalation of cock sizes you would have otherwise.
Supreme Overlord Llama
I will take look later tonight and let ya know :)
