The Normandy's Bitch Storyboard + Script
🕑 Added 2019-08-09 21:17:31 +0000 UTCI'm linking the storyboard in case anyone doesn't want to spoil all the scenes as I grouped them into one image. The script is uploaded as an attachment.
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Cut Content
The movie mostly has generic male crew, but there is also Jack and Grunt. I considered adding even more cameos but decided to cut them. Ultimately, they over complicated a project that's meant to be short.
Kasumi is one of my personal favorites, and she now has a Daz4 model, so I liked to include her. I wanted to include flashes of some more girl on girl action with her, but I think it was a bit too ambitious for this short.
The intro. While I didn't pose any of the more complicated intros, I had considered a few. Namely, I wanted Shepard talking to EDI or Kelly asking about the crew. Casting multiple voice talents and animating a 20-30 second intro was too much for this project, so I simplified it down as much as possible.
But the idea of Kelly joining in was a juicy one, so I played around with it.
I still cut it from the movie as other scenes could've really used a bit more time. Despite the short cameo, Kelly basically doubles the workload for her scene as well.
EDIT: Updated the storyboard and script. Cut two short Grunt scenes, extended Jack's scene and the finale.
Comments
Supreme Overlord Llama
Looking forward to it.
BlueLight
I'm considering it for the final scene. It depends if I can fit it within the time constraints.
Derples
This short is a good opportunity to get some cum animation practice in too
Riblit
Looking great can't wait to see more
Malgus26
Looking forward to it as always
UnprocessedCoalLump
Impressive. I am enticed.