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Mage Steel Bk 2 Ch. 11

🕑 Added 2025-07-04 16:01:50 +0000 UTC

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Jordan A

Come on, follow me,” Benny said, standing up and walking out of the main room, through one of the passage’s Kon and Diur had found, but then cut across a so far unexplored space. One large run-on sentence.

Jordan A

“This won’t confuse tracking algorithms, for that you’ll need more elaborate means.” Run-on sentence. Maybe change it to the following: This won’t confuse tracking algorithms. For that, you’ll need more elaborate means.


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