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Mage Steel Bk 2 Ch. 34

🕑 Added 2025-08-06 16:01:41 +0000 UTC

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Nicolas Marty

Thanks for the chapter! This sentence doesn't feel right to me : "She had begun to complain about their constant fighting was draining her to a level she couldn’t operate at." Would this be better ? > She had begun to complain about their constant fighting draining her to a level she couldn’t operate at or > She had begun to complain that their constant fighting was draining her to a level she couldn’t operate at

Mr. Iron

Ah, I was figuring he was a 1st or 2nd gen descendant after the scattering. Not an Earthling, makes his obsession with home a bit more meaningful. TTFC.


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