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🕑 Added 2025-03-18 17:43:59 +0000 UTC

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VoidAutarch

I mean his class is provided by the system correct? If the system is clueing you in on a scummy individual, why do you have to think so hard? You just finish off Jordan and his goons to pay for off all the negative karma they reaped from killing others and takeover the faction

Avyck3721

I appreciate the comment and Layton is seeing the signs, he just doesn't want to be hasty in judgement quite yet I think. I totally see where you're coming from though

tibbish

"I didn’t want to jump to conclusions about Jordan but the evidence was hard to ignore." This seems a bit much author. After being in the murder home, his class constantly cluing him into something being wrong, and the state of the town its pretty obvious what is going on. And that is ignoring the murders. At this point I feel as if the MC would make excuses to ignore a 70ft tall flashing sign stating that Jordan is totally evil and killing people for giggles! The chapter, and story, are otherwise solid though so don't take my comment here too harshly.


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