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Chapter 86 - The end of book one. We move to epilogues and then straight into book 2

🕑 Added 2025-04-14 05:15:17 +0000 UTC

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Avyck3721

I’m with you here. Forgiveness doesn’t mean no consequences there are people who exist can’t be aloud to remain I.e Jordan

tibbish

Hmph. Its not a bad chapter per se but kinda worrisome from a character development stand point. Feels like a step back. If all he takes away from his is the power of forgiveness, something he already seemed to know about going by his past actions, then he is making some rather incredibly grievous errors in judgement. While some people do deserve 2nd chances others will gladly use them to turn around and stab you in the back. As he should've learned from watching Jordan work. He also couldn't afford turning the cheek all the time and to be saintly given the circumstances of Earth's invasion, the system, and the weakness of his town. That is something you can do only from a position of overwhelming power when dealing with the duplicitous and greedy killers that he WILL have to come to terms with. He doesn't have to be a murderous killer but he has to learn to apply some common sense, improve his leadership capabilities, and learn to judge personalities better. And yes sometimes the ruthlessness of a sudden murderous ambush from time to time to stop his enemies from colluding to destroy him or his town.

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Edit suggestion: make due -> make do


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