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RSTUM 121

🕑 Added 2023-10-17 15:27:29 +0000 UTC

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Scientist Valci

His interactions with Alice are on another level. Being abusive and commanding, and her being so subservient when he just slept with someone else when they are engaged, just makes no sense.

Scientist Valci

I read all the 23 chapters. It was an amazing read. The last couple of chapters felt different though. This whole dwarf district arc feels uncomfortable because he is the son of the duthess and his brother is the little lord so how isn't this solved with a single letter from them? He has been reliant on them for everything the last 20 chapters so why suddenly deciding to do the hard dirty work. I know this is his speciality and is what he is used to, but still feels forced. For addition the details of the enviourment and layout are bad and the location of what is happening in this arc is very confusing. I couldn't follow what was happening and what kind of situations he was even in.


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