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End of the Month Update/Poll
🕑 Added 2022-05-26 18:34:08 +0000 UTCHello everyone!
Hope May found you well. It was pretty busy for me, but that's not a bad thing at all. A couple things were delayed or pushed back, but others moved forward comfortably. Have the next Outlaw Stars nearly done and should be out first week of the month, the bonus short story is likewise finished but for some editing, and the next Monster Girl Lord is doing pretty well.
Still too close to call who'll win the Learning Curves bonus ending, so get those votes in now! It's down to the wire.
And finally, it's time for the next Outlaw Stars poll! We're looking at reaching the lost vessel and discovering some nefarious obstacle within. The only question is what it's gonna be?
Comments
Jay Aury
That's a fair criticism, and I'd say there's a bit of truth there. Much of the content can feel a bit samey, and a big part of that is that most of these stories involve conflict, and my brand leans towards femdom and hypno, which contracts some of the fetishes. Likewise, much of the voting involves giving patrons what they want, which is where the suggestion polls enter into it. I do try and put in a bit more variety in with the cyoa, but the nature of the adventure leans towards conflict, which, to avoid anything non-consenting, leans heavily on mind control tropes. This was a problem with Manor of the Succubi, and I'm trying to move away from 'conflict is the only answer' with Outlaw Stars, allowing more consensual encounters to develop. The next one is big on that, which I hope will answer your question, and I'm certainly aiming for some more of that. Hope that answers some of your concerns.
Tex the Gentle Giant
If I may say, I'm noticing a recurring pattern. Plant girl, ooze girl, hive queen... goblin shortstacks, holstaurs with hypnotizing milk, etc. Don't get me wrong, I do love these monsters, but it kinda feels like we're getting a revolving door of the same tropes with different set dressings and slightly different characters. Bimboification and hypnosis are reoccurring usually, with sometimes sissification making a guest appearance at the hands of five or six monsters who will bend you to their whim if they sleep with you, and the reason is usually corruption of some kind. Again, I like all of those things, really, but I worry about the writings becoming a bit stale with the lack of variety. Are there any kinks or tropes that haven't been touched, if not ever, then in a while? Or monsters that haven't been used yet, or for some time? I like CYOA, and I'm very aware of how difficult they can be to write and keep fresh, but maybe it wouldn't hurt to try something a bit riskier or experimental?
CyanMax
Hoping for Alien Hive Queen. Big, busty queen of the hive. And if it wins, hoping for a "Bad End" where the main character becomes mutated into the small, dumb, but massive-cocked consort/breeding stud of the queen, endlessly impregnating her so her sexy daughters can take over the galaxy ^^
