JayAury
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Looking for Beta Readers
🕑 Added 2024-11-01 03:50:35 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
End of the month is here, and I managed to get my next book ready for a look over by some people. If you want to volunteer, give me a shout either in the comments here or send me a DM.
My new series is called Grimmwald. It's a steampunk humour mad science haremlit romp, featuring gloomy castles, Baba Yaga's spare car, creepy maids, and amorous werewolves.
I'm mainly looking for 3 things from betas:
1) Locating any inconsistencies/plot holes in the narrative.
2) Opinions on the pace, relationships, and banter.
3) Readability, in that how easy was it to read, where was it rough, and importantly, if you did stop reading, where and why?
Naturally, I'd love any feedback as well, positive or negative. What worked, what didn't. What could be expanded, where tightened. If this sounds like something you'd be interested in, let me know! And I'll give you a link.
Comments
Admiral Sheer
If you still need readers I can have a crack at it!
Abraxas
I'd be happy to
toxdaniel
I'd be happy to volunteer to beta read!
Ethan Graves
I'm happy to take a crack at it. I'm a fan and one of the better ways to improve at writing is reading + feedback and discussion.
Spaceman86
Sure, count me in as a volunteer if you haven't already got enough folks.
Octofang
It seems interesting, I would certainly love to give you some feedback
V01D
Definitely interested!
jms
Happy to help if you'll have ne
John Teets
As a fellow writer, I am more than happy to help you out! Say the word, and I'm there!
