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Godslayer Lysette: Chapter 207

🕑 Added 2024-09-14 15:20:09 +0000 UTC

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Anonymous

Still, I’d sooner expect that from one of the children protesting not being allowed to eat yet.

Ria Corvidiva

Perhaps a bit so, yes. But while Lysette is known for many things, half-measures are certainly not one of them. Neither is mental stability, to note.

Anonymous

Lying prostrate is a tad overdramatic, no?

Bielna

This speech is nice. It's a mix of looking at the present (informing the villagers that there is a war that is already ongoing) and future (hoping to avoid future battles and make a peaceful world). It may also be, in a way, a sign of progress if we compare the previous remembrance and this one - a less violent speech, fewer people who died, while many have been taken prisoners. And of course Lysette actually embracing the way of the people of Ciricu rather than being a witness (a bit like Rayleigh is today). And of course, Serrena sending Lysette and Mirae in silent embarrassment by telling them some things about their "debauchery". Now that's a W for her that I will revel in !

Jessica

Lysette is best when she is so full of hope and idealism. 🥰

Ria Corvidiva

burying their heads into their parents's bodies (as a scared or frightened child might huddle up to them for protection / safety). I think it's fine but I can always clarify if needed.

Jessica

Maybe it's just me because I'm not a native speaker, but in "clutched onto their parents’ thighs and waists, burying their heads while their parents" I would have expecte burying their heads in something. the naked just burying their heads reads a bit odd to me, but again might be perfectly Ok and it's just me.

Ria Corvidiva

good catch, change will be made. Sadly I can't get new epubs up since the site I use only gives you very limited conversions each day and I just burnt it all on the new chapters.

Ria Corvidiva

Removed Rayleigh's line there, and now Serrena's starts: Serrena’s scowl grew more intense. “We’re getting along rather well, thank you very much. Thankfully in our case, getting along well is limited to cooperating as Cultivators and as a master and a disciple ought to be! Not… whatever foul ideas the two of you get into seemingly every other evening...”

Jessica

"But seeing the bodies of her four victims last night" Did you mean her four victims *from* last night? Because she is seeing them right now, isn't she?

Ria Corvidiva

oh goodness, did I commit such a blunder? :worriedemoji: I think I must have misordered that. Mirae is supposed to ask, and then Rayleigh pops in. I'll have to fix that once I get done with the next seven chapter uploads

Jessica

It says Rayleigh dropped out of the sky saying "we're getting along well" and then Mirae asks "Where is Rayleigh anyway". I would expect Mirae to have noticed Rayleigh from the first description and if she went away I would have expected them to ask "Where has Rayleigh gone" not "where is she".


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