KurtLogan
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Alpha Taskforce: Parts 1-3
🕑 Added 2021-11-10 14:10:29 +0000 UTCHello everyone. I wish to share with you an updated version of this old story. I know many of you have read the old content I posted on Diana The Valkyrie ages ago and for those of you who have not, it's a series I started back in the year 2000. In this story is where characters like DeeDee, Stacy and Laura were first introduced.
The story comes with a few illustrations but I will make many more and post them referencing the story. I figured you guys would prefer to have the story on your hands now than to wait weeks for complementary images (which will come any way).
Without any further preamble, I hope you enjoy the story.
And if you do enjoy it, please leave a comment. This rewrite was a very time consuming labor of love and will be truly awesome to get some feedback from you guys.
Warning: The story contains Violence!
Cheers!
-Kurt
Comments
dtchdude
Very nice! I'm about halfway through the re-read. Really like the interrogation and the part about DeeDee trampling the bank clerk. Would make nice images too!
Kim Danver
My English is not very good, but it was the first entire story I ever read in English. I really love your writing style. I've imagined all the scenes where Stacy having fun with her poor victimes. If only we could see it all ! As Pandorea, Stacy is one of my favorite character, she's the perfect sexy, dominante and super strong woman.
Kurt Logan
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to give those two girls distinct personalities and give us an idea why they are there working for those mobsters. DeeDee is a complex woman, she is there doing what she does out of a sense of gratitude. For as long as Victor keeps doing what she is doing for someone important to her, she will be at his side doing anything he tells her without question or remorse. Stacy on the other hand is like a wild animal, completely unhinged and she is there because she gets paid very well to enjoy herself and because she has found in Leo a Kindred spirit, someone as violent and crazy as she is.
grungykitten
Very nice. I like the added content fleshing out Stacy and DeeDee's characters, and their relationship with the Verducci's.
Kurt Logan
By the way. The story "Battle Scars" (https://www.patreon.com/posts/alpha-taskforce-24303935) takes place immediately after this one.
Kurt Logan
It happens after. This would be about 6 months before The Visit. In this story we see how the team forms. On The Visit, they've been working together for some time.
John Alamo
Does « The Visit » happens before or after this Story ?
