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[Comic] Makayla, the unmovable - Pages 104 - 107
🕑 Added 2024-08-23 20:45:54 +0000 UTCHello everyone,
Here is the next four pages for Makayla the unmovable.
I'm trying something new here. I'm writing the dialogue considering the particular accents for the characters. Makayla is a southern American teenage girl from Georgia, she would have a mild southern accent, and Rose is French, so she would have a heavy French accent. It's my hope this will add a distinct flavor to each character and make our roster feel more diverse.
Just for clarification, is not that they are only now sounding like this, in my mind they always have, but now I'm trying to write down how I think they would sound.
Let me know if you like this change.
Note: If you wish to read the comic from the start, the easiest way is to do it through the Collections option. There is one with just the pages to this comic, which you can view in order from the very first page to the current. There is also a channel in our discord server exclusive to this comic, so you can find all the pages there as well.
Cheers!
Kurt
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Comments
grungykitten
Not a huge fan of the accented speech. I appreciate what you're trying to do, and I do think it's effective, but it feels cheesy as well.
