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Chapter 129 - TFF

🕑 Added 2024-02-27 12:41:54 +0000 UTC

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k

Trying to tie it all together unfortunately takes a bit more, precisely because I made it so random. Lots is going on but I prefer to focus on the fight first, then we read up on the changes for a while. [Monochrome Armor]'s strange behavior being resolved will take a bit more... I will do my best. And thanks for the kind words! I'm really not being cruel on purpose. Still figuring out tension and stuff.

bauspar

The last few chapters were great. You could basically feel the change, even though it was slow. Masterfully done. But I nontheless have to ask you again to stop being so cruel and finally TELL US WHATS GOING ON. +++ And as a little criticism: Alans progression feels kinda random. I know its probably wanted but it nonetheless creates a kind of uncertainty as to where he is going with his path. I hope that its going to be resolved soon. Tbh I really just want him to be a cool planning dark mage :)


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