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114 - Exhibition: Boris Vs Tate

🕑 Added 2025-05-02 23:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Alex Rahr

Typos and suggestions dodging his too. (either) dodging him too. (or) dodging his blows too. Tate felt a little embarrassed to be thrown about (for the non-mindreaders in the audience) Tate looked a little embarrassed to be thrown about Brutus Boris Xena didn't’ Xena didn't (lose final apostrophe) Xena and Dewi Xena and Dewie

A nice fire

I think it would be "Just as the thirty minutes were about to elapse, Tate sung his feet and kicked him in the side of the head"

PrettyPinkCupcake

Just as the thirty minutes were about to elapse, he swung his feet and kicked him in the side of the head sending him onto the floor.  >>> Just as the thirty minutes were about to elapse, Tate swung his feet and kicked Boris in the side of the head sending him onto the floor.  (Am I correct? The use of pronouns rather than names makes it a bit confusing).


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