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Chapter 50 - Of Ghouls and Books, SC

🕑 Added 2024-05-25 21:47:17 +0000 UTC

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k

Ah. I think I finally understand what you mean by 'logical' and 'forced'. That's where I might disagree though, as I don't believe in MCs who don't make mistakes. While Sunday is meant to be quick to adapt and cunning due to his background and the 'prelude' to it all, he is in no way capable of foreseeing every possible outcome of his interactions. Especially when it comes to something as foreign as spells. And especially during a fight with a nightmare doggie. Then again, while I do love OP MCs in small doses, I can't stand stories where mistakes don't suffer consequences, or the MC is not allowed mistakes. Thank you for giving me your thoughts! It's very helpful to have an outside perspective!

EsZeus

Well written :) Personal taste: I don't like the whole Jishu background Arc and what is happening ^^ It's clearly just a product of thw MCs stupidity. (telling yes to someone who wants something SO HARD from you to repeatedly ask you over and over again is dumb^^) So the Jishu Background arc is more a forced way for more drama and stress the MC needs to encounter now. Never liked these forced encounters ^^ But this is REALLY only personal taste^^ and manipulation in any form comes with it, too. Thanks for the chapter !


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