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209 - Night Falls

🕑 Added 2025-10-20 23:40:39 +0000 UTC

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Kamso Addo-Noble

Yeah, google docs, grammarly and my own two eyes really failed me last night. Fixing now.

Orca

Typos. There's a lot today. It's eyes were Its eyes were (There's a whole lot of instances of it's. It's is a contraction of it is, its is the possessive and I think every time this chapter you want that possessive.) were clicking noise, were a clicking noise, "I know that's why I used it." "I know, that's why I used it." slightly to different position slightly to different positions to stand one to stand in one wasso was so I don't know. We'll be back soon. (This seems out of place. It also might need quotes around it, wherever it's supposed to be.) diappared disappeared unlinkig unlinking Cecilia first approach to teleportation by Cecilia's first approach to teleportation was by they then farther they then tried farther Luckilt, Luckily, alway been always been her elboy her elbow decieved deceived it's stagnation its stagnation expore explore are these one are these ones out of her, out of here, Start with inanimate object, Start with an inanimate object, Uncle max Uncle Max

Wensber

Thanks for the chapter!


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