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Book 2: Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2024-04-25 11:51:20 +0000 UTC

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Dylan Suomela

||…it was even an island or some other weird environment that he would have expected from… || it wasn’t* even || It was taken straight out of ancient Rome, and incredible sight…|| an* incredible || “You think you are so much better than the rest of us because you were number 1 one the leader board?|| number 1 on* || Trevor had come over in the hopes of getting him to enter not some battle of words and he just wasn’t going to take the bait.|| enter into* some || One the sixth and seventh day of the third week of stage…|| On* the sixth ||…growing ore uncomfortable by the second…|| growing more*

ShanDeRad

Hey Dylan, edit suggestions are always great. Happy for you to message them to me or post as comment.

Dylan Suomela

Thanks for the chapter! Quick question: Would you welcome edit suggestions, and if so, where would you like them posted?


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