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Book 2: Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2024-05-15 14:00:17 +0000 UTC

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ShanDeRad

Thanks Akkido, fixed that one up.

Akkido

You said that the Empire was one of two factions who did not extend an offer, but then you have Xavier, the Empire Rep, telling Shaun to join his faction. You should fix this.

Dylan Suomela

|| That in itself makes you highly sort after in many factions…|| sought* after || Someone at some point is going to have to take control and whichever faction or clan they belong too controls the planet.|| belong to*


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