🕑 Added 2015-01-07 23:41:18 +0000 UTC
All categories 5+ sponsors is welcome to send me your version of the dialogue (this is true as long as the page is done in the final quality).
Once a day I will publish all submitted options.
All sponsors will be able to vote for their favorite option. One whose options will be chosen more points for the third part - get a special thanks in the credits at the end of the third part + extra slot in the lottery.
One whose version of the text will often sympathize with the sponsors at the end of the work on this comic will get pride of place in the credits + free pictures (full of color) from me on any of his requests.
This game is played mainly to entertain sponsors and if the options would be contrary to the plot or the characters - I reserve the right to choose your own text. In this case, victory is read and the one whose text like most of the audience and the one whose version ended up in the final version of the page.
In this case - the first round of the game. Four sketch - 21, 22, 23 and 24 page.
Most of them do not need the text, but in the frame, where Hattie ran into the kitchen dialogue is needed.
Background information:
Jimmy welcomes her appearance, he was glad to see her.
Hetty can not wait to continue the breakfast ;)
send your version in private messages. I remind that the text can be not only the text of the dialogue (direct speech of the characters), but the text of the narrator. Such text may be present in any frame, but remember - its size must be reasonable. Not too much text;)
below in the comments I'll post sent to the currently version.
each version is assigned a number. If you wish to support one or another version - published number comments and page number, text support to which you like.
