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The Barbarian Awakening - Chapter 26

🕑 Added 2025-08-13 16:00:24 +0000 UTC

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The Hand Behind the Veil

Hahahahaha you're loving the story! It hypes me up. And it's not that I'm avoiding comedy, the vibe is quite light as you can see so I'm not going for a gritty or dark type story, BUT I... can't write comedy 😂 I consider myself humorous, but I just don't have the skill to write comedy for some reason. I envy authors who can write comedy. Maybe I just need to read more comedic novels?

Ron1990

I like this classical rpg feeling. two warriors, a mage and a merchant, who will get a class in the near future. Ok, classic approach, you need a sneaky one in your party. Common rogue or assassin doesn't fit with his persona. Perhaps a 'Tomb Raider' or 'Agent of the Crown'? Can throw a punch, finds traps, capable in using social skills? And imho you need a comical sidekick. Your action scenes are wonderful to read, character building is ok, romatic affairs is ok, but you are avoiding humor in your stories? Perhaps it needs something like Ratatosk, squirrellike messenger of the World Tree, but seventh or eighth ascension. Smol but fierce, fluffy but a seasoned warrior and shaman of nature (Because your party lacks a healer). And then let the interaction start 😄. Nice, you get my imagination flowing, so, story well done so far 🥰! Oh, I forget.. they found the Monster Manual, but where is the Dungeon Master's Guide 🤣?


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