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Hellion Verse 1:1-19 (NSFW)
🕑 Added 2023-08-16 17:00:07 +0000 UTCAnd we're back with a huge 19 page update! Thank you for being so patient! Next week we will return to single page weekly updates! <:
Now... I can explain;;; I originally paused Hellion because I wanted to reformat it into singular page format. The long scrolling format was cool. It had its quirks. It was just.... a huge... pain... in the butt. Images weren't loading correctly or at all. Legibility was bad. I had to split them up into chunks anyway so it defeated the whole purpose of having a scrolling effect. All of this made me decide to reformat the comic into pages rather than scrolling episodes
So of course when the opportunity rises I can't turn my brain off and I'm like THIS IS MY CHANCE! This is my chance to fix all the things that were confusing or that I could have drawn better. I did a poll a while back and a huge portion of the response was that the comic is just confusing. I don't mind it being a little confusing... just a little... it's supposed to be somewhat surreal so that's natural... but it really seemed like no one had any clue to what was going on and tbh that felt like a failure on my end;;;
The story is the same! I just shifted a few events around because I wanted to throw in a sex scene right at the start. I did my best to clear up the dialogue so it's easier to follow (I hope;;;;) Here's a few things I actually did change though:
- new sex scene
- Hideous' hair is short
- Hideous is now literally bound to Grace, no more chains
That's about it for now xD;;;
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Koi Boi Tracy
Arooga
Not-Kyle
The reformatting of this series is incredible! You have made all of the improvements perfectly!
